Now do not be a one time "poster" and leave us Hanging.
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Anonymous06/23/12
Nice start
Loved how he put her in her place because of her behavior.
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Anonymous06/27/12
oh my great story
I found your story very enlighten from all points of view. Like other readers I hope you have more chapters. If not what you shared was great and have me thinking of my own ending
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Anonymous09/10/14
Too Fast
You did not have any build up before they kissed, most unbelievable.
Don't listen to the "too fast" comment about no build up! To me, I didn't feel like the story was rushed in any way. Sure, they're just about to hop into bed but hot damn they deserve it! Two hard working folk that need a little lovin. Please continue, this story had me apprehensive at first because of the time/era but I'm simply grateful I gave it a chance. Please finish this story!!!!
English
Can't wait for page 2.
*****
Five.
Good start . Can't wait to read more . : )
Nice
Now do not be a one time "poster" and leave us Hanging.
Nice start
Loved how he put her in her place because of her behavior.
oh my great story
I found your story very enlighten from all points of view. Like other readers I hope you have more chapters. If not what you shared was great and have me thinking of my own ending
Too Fast
You did not have any build up before they kissed, most unbelievable.
Don't listen to the "too fast" comment about no build up! To me, I didn't feel like the story was rushed in any way. Sure, they're just about to hop into bed but hot damn they deserve it! Two hard working folk that need a little lovin. Please continue, this story had me apprehensive at first because of the time/era but I'm simply grateful I gave it a chance. Please finish this story!!!!
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