I liked this, good description of the fuck scene where Amy got her brains fucked out by her big black Bull. I particularly liked the fact that the Bull picked up on her need to be domonated by a strong man (or perhaps a woman)
The story development was excellent. The ending was unexpected- she needed a Dom - which really made the story work for me. A follow on chapter would be interesting!
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Anonymous06/15/12
Stupid
Your worst effort yet.
by
Anonymous08/03/12
hot
The sex is hot and I like the subtle descriptions of Quinn's perceptiveness.
I liked this, good description of the fuck scene where Amy got her brains fucked out by her big black Bull. I particularly liked the fact that the Bull picked up on her need to be domonated by a strong man (or perhaps a woman)
Another great one.
The story development was excellent. The ending was unexpected- she needed a Dom - which really made the story work for me. A follow on chapter would be interesting!
Stupid
Your worst effort yet.
hot
The sex is hot and I like the subtle descriptions of Quinn's perceptiveness.
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