All Comments on 'Overpowered'

by oxfofo

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SilentbystanderSilentbystanderalmost 12 years ago
hot hot hot

Very sexy, although I was confused as to how he was being forced to make out with the guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very Nice!

I love how you managed to make him overpowered without the storyline being brutal or ridiculous. It's classy!

oxfofooxfofoalmost 12 years agoAuthor
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@Anonymous

Thank you!

@Silentbystander

You're right, I should have clarified that a little. Sorry, these things slip past.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sexy storyline

This is one smoking story without being a bashing story. Domination whether you admit to yourself or not can be something some people want to experience at least once in their lives. And our virgin boy I think wanted it, even though he said he didn't "his anal first time with a guy"? Who else? The first lines I like the most the "idea of the fem. with a dominant" set the stage for the everything

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MORE

Please carry this on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Too hot to not say i I love chapter one...

I love how the submissive started with an invitation for weed and then when he was suddenly dominated wanted to run...

And love how the author allows the reader to hang at end of chapter while the the Dominus restrains the submissive and then going to sleep...

Love it!....Regards... bencoyotee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
keep it going

loved the story. Its so hot when a dominant just takes control . so hard reading it That happened to me before and he turned me that night

crazeeboy123crazeeboy123almost 10 years ago
wonderful

How wonderful it would be to be overpowered & dominated like the way described in the story.I am looking forward to the mornings exploits

campernjcampernjover 9 years ago
HOT story!

Wow HOT story! I wish you would continue it, but I doubt you will - it being over 2 yrs since you posted this. I was wondering what the forced subs name was how big HIS cock is however.....Please continue it! - 5 stars! ( I voted, lol) I love these types of stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I like it, it's got a personal touch

I love how dominant he was over him, but yeah that's just me a sub talking. Granted when I was reading this, it kinda reminded me of when I lost my vCard, not to the full extant, and willingly, but yeah, still great memories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hated it

this is should be called RAPE and KIDNAPPING

bencoyoteebencoyoteealmost 9 years ago

Love the line, "I own your little ass completely."

Please, I must have more of this story of the resistant boy being subdued and yet funny he the young slave initiated it with the pot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
waiting

looking forward to the sequeal

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
MMM nice

I wish I had been taken like that , you will love it in the morning and want more XXX

2wayroad2wayroadalmost 5 years ago
Perfect scenario

If only I’d met someone like him when I was 18. I was turned on by the thought of sex with men, but had no idea of how to go about finding it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Hot story! I’d love to see a sequel or another like it

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