@Silentbystander
You're right, I should have clarified that a little. Sorry, these things slip past.
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Anonymous07/23/12
Sexy storyline
This is one smoking story without being a bashing story. Domination whether you admit to yourself or not can be something some people want to experience at least once in their lives. And our virgin boy I think wanted it, even though he said he didn't "his anal first time with a guy"? Who else? The first lines I like the most the "idea of the fem. with a dominant" set the stage for the everything
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Anonymous11/13/13
MORE
Please carry this on!
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Anonymous03/13/14
Too hot to not say i I love chapter one...
I love how the submissive started with an invitation for weed and then when he was suddenly dominated wanted to run...
And love how the author allows the reader to hang at end of chapter while the the Dominus restrains the submissive and then going to sleep...
Love it!....Regards... bencoyotee
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Anonymous03/30/14
keep it going
loved the story. Its so hot when a dominant just takes control . so hard reading it That happened to me before and he turned me that night
Wow HOT story! I wish you would continue it, but I doubt you will - it being over 2 yrs since you posted this. I was wondering what the forced subs name was how big HIS cock is however.....Please continue it! - 5 stars! ( I voted, lol) I love these types of stories!
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Anonymous10/22/14
I like it, it's got a personal touch
I love how dominant he was over him, but yeah that's just me a sub talking. Granted when I was reading this, it kinda reminded me of when I lost my vCard, not to the full extant, and willingly, but yeah, still great memories.
English
hot hot hot
Very sexy, although I was confused as to how he was being forced to make out with the guy.
Very Nice!
I love how you managed to make him overpowered without the storyline being brutal or ridiculous. It's classy!
In Reply
@Anonymous
Thank you!
@Silentbystander
You're right, I should have clarified that a little. Sorry, these things slip past.
Sexy storyline
This is one smoking story without being a bashing story. Domination whether you admit to yourself or not can be something some people want to experience at least once in their lives. And our virgin boy I think wanted it, even though he said he didn't "his anal first time with a guy"? Who else? The first lines I like the most the "idea of the fem. with a dominant" set the stage for the everything
MORE
Please carry this on!
Too hot to not say i I love chapter one...
I love how the submissive started with an invitation for weed and then when he was suddenly dominated wanted to run...
And love how the author allows the reader to hang at end of chapter while the the Dominus restrains the submissive and then going to sleep...
Love it!....Regards... bencoyotee
keep it going
loved the story. Its so hot when a dominant just takes control . so hard reading it That happened to me before and he turned me that night
wonderful
How wonderful it would be to be overpowered & dominated like the way described in the story.I am looking forward to the mornings exploits
HOT story!
Wow HOT story! I wish you would continue it, but I doubt you will - it being over 2 yrs since you posted this. I was wondering what the forced subs name was how big HIS cock is however.....Please continue it! - 5 stars! ( I voted, lol) I love these types of stories!
I like it, it's got a personal touch
I love how dominant he was over him, but yeah that's just me a sub talking. Granted when I was reading this, it kinda reminded me of when I lost my vCard, not to the full extant, and willingly, but yeah, still great memories.
hated it
this is should be called RAPE and KIDNAPPING
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