All Comments on 'My Boner Stops Time Ch. 04'

by JeffreyFreemont

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
not fun enough

need more hijinks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
painful to read.

At one point you used the wrong name of the main character... The plot is awful, the grammar is awful, the syntax is awful. I feel like the was written by a seventh grade student.

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