All Comments on 'Passionate Anger'

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WORDS FROM A PSUEDO MASO

to a faux sado. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 12 years ago
READ YOU !

LIKED YOUR POEM !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome!

You can feel her anger and passion coming through this poem. It's unusal in that it's shouting out to the reader, but that's the whole purpose isn't it? I liked it the first time I read it. I liked it when I edited it and now that it's published and out there for public consumption I love it.

You are so brave. I'm glad you stuck to your guns.

sunshinegirl05sunshinegirl05almost 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you guys!!!! I really could not see this poem written or changed any other way.

njoyndesirenjoyndesirealmost 12 years ago
I so relate

Hey ...

I can really relate to the feeling in this... and there's nothing better than being wrapped in their arms after coming down from that place.

avrgblkgrlavrgblkgrlalmost 12 years ago
This is ...

Powerful stuff!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
NEVER EVER EVER

POST YOUR WORK IN ALL CAPS. IT IS ONLINE RUDENESS AND MADE ME WANT TO GIVE YOU A 1, I DIDN'T, BUT SHOULD HAVE

sunshinegirl05sunshinegirl05almost 12 years agoAuthor

When I wrote this piece, I felt anger and frustration. This was the way it came out...and I felt that this was the only way it could be written.

Thank you for reading, critiquing, and voting on it. I do appreciate hearing people's opinions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Intense

I like this one. I have told you that before.

sunshinegirl05sunshinegirl05over 11 years agoAuthor

@RickyChampagne Thank you...and yes you have. I'm glad you still enjoy it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The All Caps

Makes it more intense and the anger really comes through.

sunshinegirl05sunshinegirl05over 11 years agoAuthor

That's what I thought, BBB. You have to look at what the writing is about...and read it in that mindset...in my opinion.

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