I have read other stories of milk sows. This was not "odd" in that way. Incorrect usage of words throughout the story made it a bit difficult to read. Example: using "where" for the word "were". The other strange thing about this is that it is being told by the person to whom this treatment was applied.... and yet she is supposedly not thinking right because of the drugs. She explains her confused thinking because of them and yet she is telling the story..... odd. I liked it for the story but I think the author should proof read and consider telling the story in the third person.
Thanks for all comments. I'm sorry about the incorrect grammar, English is not my native tongue and I know I have much to learn. I just love story's about milk and large breasts, I don't think there are enough of those story's here on Literotica so I decided to make some myself. My hope is that people who are better authors then me will create more story's similar to this.
I actually disagree with Nitro. I don't think that your writing style is odd at all, in fact I think you write very well and grammatical errors etc can easily be overlooked. Your earlier stories are perhaps even better but whatever, you should definitely not be put off writing and I'd love to read more from you.
my only complaint is how sudden the ending is. you could have ended it a lot better. but still good none the less
I liked this story, but I do think you went a little bit fast into the ending. Just my opinion, mind you, but I think you should have moved a bit more slowly into Anna's descent into becoming a cowslave /prostitute. I do think you are a good writer, so keep writing!
Yes, another good one
It ended to quickly. Great story idea!
write a second chapter of this or continue pages of this to show how far down she has sunken and what she does in detail.
I REALLY HOPE THIS STORY WILL CONTINUE ONE WAY OR ANOTHER, LIKE THE WAY THEY WENT ABOUT ABDUCTING WESTERN WOMEN WITH LARGE BREAST, THEN AS WELL GIVING EACH BREAST A SHOT TO MAKE THEM START GROWING AND LACTATING, THEN USED AS MILK COWS FOR MEN PLEASURE, HOPE IF THE STORY CONTIUES THAT THE SAME WOMEN CAN BE USED, MAYBE POSSIBLE SOLD TO A PRIVATE PARTY OR SENT TO ANOTHER TWISTED MEDICAL PLACE FOR MORE SADISTIC USE.....
I work at a dairy and we attach a machine to the teat so it will constantly milk the cow, I could see where they would bring her into a room and have her lay face down on a bench that has it's sides cut out so her tits will hang down where by attaching a milking machine that will milk her constantly like a cow, plus a tube that is inserted into her vagina to deliver semen into her to be kept pregnant at all times while being a sex slave, men would pay top dollar to have her impregnated with their sperm, or have a community donors cup where it's anybody's, plus the other women there as well
I made a second chapter to this story, its up now.
Where's the conclusion?
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