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A beautiful tale
But the most impressive thing about this author is seeing, through reading his earlier work, just how much he's improved. Great effort, thanks for sharing.
5 *****
love the fact that the author is making sure that it is heart felt with a little mystery in there. He trying to show the human being mind, body, and soul and can be destroyed to a inch of breaking in a single moment and never deal with what happen without some really great help or go mental insane and be on meds in a 6X4 room with floor to ceiling padding. I am glad that he let the Bobby find that help and even let fall in love. Ever person on the plant Earth, hell in the universe should be so lucky to find a person like Karen in there lives. I know i would like to find a woman like that. I hope to as good as an author as Markelly at showing what a human being is possible of doing. Thanks for the story. I hope you have a chapter 3. I was looking for part 2 all day. Finally got to see it. Great stories are hard to come by on here.
THE DAMAGE THAT WAS DONE
discovered a new way for life, love and growth. TK U MLJ LV NV
Song
I finally found the name of the song that reminds me of this story. Depending who sings and when goes by 2 titles. It goes by "where, oh where, can my baby be or Last Kiss" where emotional tear base song. Thanks for writing this story Markelly.
Very Good Story
I found the story to be very good. A lot of indepth thought processes and the initial shower scene was pretty erotic indeed. My wife is lucky she wasn't here, she'd have gotten a shower. The pussy shaving was good too. All in all a lovely story. My only complaint is that it seems there was so much more that could have been handled rather than such an abrupt end.
Well Done
great story
I hope there will be an other chapter to this story.
Excellent work!
Very entertaining tale of loss, heart-mending, and sacrifices rewarded. You handled this premise completely differently from the way I would have; that's part of the reason I enjoyed reading it. Nice dialogue and endearing, rich characters--well done.
SWEET!!!!!
YESSSSSSSSSS!
Good Story
Although I'm not sure why it's entitled Kimberly as you play such a small role in the overall story
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