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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A FANTASIA OF EMOTIONS

brought on by the closeness of exuberance, TK U MLJ LV NV

ladyserenityladyserenityover 11 years ago
Wow....

your words lead me through the very act.....capturing the breathless pinicle which a desire gives.....leaving me wanting...............

deadeye_76deadeye_76over 11 years ago
Excellent!

I love this poem. I can't believe you wrote this in high school. Anything I wrote in high school would have sounded like drivel.

uSolitary1964uSolitary1964about 8 years ago
Beautiful...

Beautiful...

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I went to school for creative writing but haven't tried to make a living off it yet. Right now I just need an outlet for my creative juices, ;-). The things I write for this site are VERY dark. If you're a hopeless romantic and want to read about two people who are sweet an...