All Comments on 'I Don't Go Inside'

you dont have to enter diffusion will rule. TK U MLJ LV NV

I think this has promise, Lasalia, but I couldn't connect the first ten lines with the concluding eight. Maybe some lines of a seguay would have helped.

I can almost smell exactly what you are talking about. Good job.

You are not missing anything poetic by not going in the HS boys room! Trust me!

Cinnamon & spice vs. puppy dog tails (soiled!)