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IF YOU NEVER MISS IT TILL ITS GONE
what if you cant miss it if you dont know what it is or what to do with. TK U MLJ LV NV
A fun quickie
This was original and cute. Five stars, thanks for writing.
This was kind of funny
gave it a four, the swinging and stuff is my cup of tea, but well done. 4*'s
A very remarkable story.
Quirky, interesting and wonderful. I liked it. Thank you.
Very thoughtful.
This was well written and different. I liked it.
sweet, wonderful...
...and very well written. thanks.
I Enjoyed this a Lot
Unique and well-written. There are many unanswered questions, but it just adds to the mystery. Made me wish you had more submissions in the LW genre.
Enticing,
exciting the imagination. Fun, full of mystery and loving kindness.
Thank you for writing this.
Regards,
-Pultoy
Nicely done
Well written. Nice plot.
Very nice
Liked it! Surprised me. Definatly fun to read.
Good!
Very unique story, enjoyed it a lot.
Original
Well written and thoroughly enjoyable.
Quite lovely
A fine piece indeed. Thank you. And your name resonates... a border ballad forsooth!
a breath of fresh air
TamLin01 has discovered an original plot line. Kudos for that alone. But not only was the plot original, the story was delightful.
Two for the price of one. Well Done.
Marvellous yarn...
I grant you five stars!
Quite unusual
Very erotic and also very interesting. I was wondering why only 2 wishes and I knew you couldn't help but to tell us. I liked a lot of the observations on human nature. Why do we fall in love? For some people it might as well be magic. Nice. There is also the side of human nature that causes us to wish for things we know are bad for us and the guilt that prevents us from carrying out the desire. In this case, he was able to uniquely solve the quandary, get the secret desire but then erase the memory and the guilt. Clever.
I have only one question. What's Darius' number?
Great Story
Being in love is independent of any why! The poor djinn really has to work very hard.
Really great
Thoughtful, original, erotic and interesting. Great dialogue, cool twist. Excellent writing.
In the end, there was love all around. Immediately a favorite.
Great Story
Everyone should have two wishes. It'll make life more interesting. 17 stars.
Great tale
You should write more.
Good fantasy story
@ Dear Author Have you ever read 800IBgorilla's fantasy story "A Beautiful Wish". In that story Dawn's Mother has got only one wish for her child and I am curious that wish could work in your fantasy World?
Good fantasy story and I like fantasy stories 5 stars.
Fantastic!
One of the best twists to a LW story that I've ever seen. This category always fascinates me, not so much because of the fantasy but because of the different feedback different stories get. I saw this story recommended on the Author's Hangout forum today and I'm glad I swung by to take a peek! You have a wonderfully creative mind. Looking forward to seeing what else you come up with!
I loved it!
Your head must be a very interesting place. 5
My fav literotica story
Congratulations, I read many stories here (almost everyday), and this became my favourite ever. It's amazingly compelling and thrilling. Your observations on human nature are provoking and brilliant. What else can I say? Thank you!
Odd (not just because of Fantasy content)
Sweetie burns her first wish on getting Hubby! (A great fucking choice, since the randy bastard can wear-out three women mercilessly - but lovingly!) Then she gives up her last two wishes to this EverReady Bunny of Love. Sweetie, unexpectedly, directly benefits from Hubby's first choice because her sex life is kicked up a notch (or two)! Then the turkey turns around and erases wish-two, even wiping it from all participants' memories! WTF? Even offers a rationale for this dumbass act (which rationale, of course, he will not remember a few minutes after providing it.)
"If a tree falls in the forest, and no one hears it ..." kinda bullshit!
Great story, twisted my brain in a different angle!
5 stars
Thank you for a fun entertaining read. I am glad the story ended happily.
This was interesting
Certainly not a waste of time. More of an idea then a story, but I liked the psychological quirks and self awareness shown by all of the actors involved. I actually LIKED all the characters involved, which is rarer then you'd think.
I don't have a beef with the wife. If the man fell in love with her and thought it was his idea, his happiness is not affected by 'the truth'. And she showed sufficient remorse of sorts to make up for any harm she did.
Nice little tale.
Hot & Clever
The sex scene was most excellent pornography and the scenes with Darius were clever and insightful - I love Nadia's rationale for not feeling guilty about using magic to get her man. Well done.
Very orginal and imaginative
A bit of the tongue in cheek humor and fantasy combined with a bit of erotica.
A good combination for an enjoyable story.
Thanks for the read.
Brilliant!
Fun story, clever plot, good humor and hot sex. I couldn't wish for anything more!
Very clever is the use of overlapping wishes....
...put to erotica it fits here, but from whence the germ of an Idea?
Fun story
and a brilliant dialogue. 5*
Wonderful! Whimsical and full of surprises
I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks, ohio
Wow!!
Very well written! Thank you!!!
Damn
Most unpredictable story I've ever read here. Thank you.
Loving Wives?
The whole category is a mess, the worst damage you may have done was to your "ratings."
Thoughtful, entrancing? Very. Rod Serling would be proud.
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