All Comments on 'New Lover in Santa Fe'

This story definitely shows promise, but it had significant problems. Some time with an editor could have smoothed over some of the rough edges, such as the use of the word "bottom" 5 times within 3 consecutive sentences. The most unfortunate item was the depiction of an alcohol enema; a Dom is responsible for his sub's safety, and this is so far outside the realm of safe and/or sane that it made it difficult to take any of the rest of it seriously.