by dreamsex1130
Hi! I am the author of this series and I would really appreciate some feedback, as I am looking into becoming a published author and unbiased opinions would really be helpful. Thanks guys!!
Nice set-up, I suppose. As a stand-alone, it doesn't make a lot of sense.
Sorry; don't give up,
Its not a stand alone.. its the first chapter of a short story.. read chapters 2, 3, and 4.