All Comments on 'Logan and Lauren Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

wat is up wit this short shit please get this shit done already

Pregnationgirl1223Pregnationgirl1223almost 12 years ago
i love logan and lauren but its time to give them an ending

And enough with the short chapters I'm excited to see where this ends its just taking forever honestly but I did love this chapter and all of them I love your writing.

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 12 years ago

Nadine is a mess. Kyle seem like he likes to have fun.

AnabelleLyrichAnabelleLyrichalmost 12 years ago
:)....

Loving the story but I have to agree that the short chapters aren't doing it

IndianPrincess2IndianPrincess2almost 12 years ago
Great

That was a great update I just love Logan's dad he's super kewl but oh his mom is really getting on my last nerve but so happy that his dad made her behave looking forward to your next update please update again real soon thanks!!

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutiealmost 12 years ago
Wonderful

Nadine is a piece of work, why Kyle is still married that drunk is beyond me. Nadine is a drunk, she disrespects him and their home. If she's drinking all day she isn't much a of mother. Please get rid of Nadine, have her liver implode or something.

adt2700adt2700almost 12 years ago
Glad to see you back!!

I am so happy to see one of my favorite couples back. Keep up the good work. Nice to see the intro of new characters. Maybe down the line Logan's Mom will grow out of being so angry and bitter.

mrskelleymrskelleyalmost 12 years ago
Great Update!

I am on the opposite...I would want Nadine and Kyle to work out. I would like to see her go to rehab and be a real wife and mother. I like Kyle, and I like how Lauren stands up for herself against Nadine. Great Job!

DnaebugsDnaebugsover 11 years ago

When I first started reading I was ready to be disappointed because it's a story about high schoolers. I was beyond surprised when not only was the story awesome but I was wrapped up in it. Cannot wait for the next chapters. Thank you for sharing your talent with me

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