by silkstockingslover
If you are concentrating on how many Harry Potter movies there are, maybe your in the wrong reading section. This is not the Newberry award winning section. But again, maybe you are trying to get out of the nerdy stage. If you are concentrating on grammatical errors, maybe you ought to offer your services to these writers as an editor.
The author was correct when he said that there were 8 Harry Potter movies. There are 7 books but they made 2 movies out of the last book which makes 8 movies. Btw great fucking story. Absolutely loved it!!!
Anon, 7 books, 8 movies. Now go back to your room. Silkstockingslover, very nice job on this one, best of luck in the contest and please write that mommy/sister sequel soon please.
I loved the story! And as you have to suspend belief a bit anyway, who gives a fuck how many Harry Potter movies there are! Read the story for the story.
Great pacing and a teasing build-up that paid off bigtime. Thanks for sharing another wild fantasy.
That was just perfect.
I'd love to read the sequel, hint, hint.
Where the mum does seduce the daughter.
A sexy, rollicking story of seduction and love between Mother and Son. Your timing was flawless as you built your story towards climax. Well Done! Looking forward to a sequel!
Simply put this story has character, verbiage, sex aplenty and legs for another Chapter. Three cheers!!!! A five rating is an injustice.
Thanks Don
Great story got to be another part it would be a shame not to find out how his mom seduces his sister
Love these stories from you. Like the others hope to see him take his mom and sister together, her ass to since she treated him badly.
waiting for the next part where the daughter/sister gets involved
great story and well done and hot hot hot....part 2 soon so many ways you can go
In similar situations some mom's would be more subtle and tease more. It is good for ego to hear yourself referred to as milf. Mom's can use these situations to advantage.
I can't wait to read the next part, with 'Pet Mommy' seducing her daughter for her Son and Master!
Please don't tease us like that! What a great start! Please continue with mom seducing her daughter to become your sister-slave, for you and mom to use however you want her used. And if your sister is such a prude, maybe she should be the one to have your baby.
"In days of old/When knights were bold/And condoms were not yet invented/They'd tie a sock/Around their cock/And jerk off, quite contented."
What a great story. I kinda wish my brother fantasized about me like that. This story really turned me on. You even even threw in a Big Bang Theory reference. That alone warranted a 5! Hope to read more of your work :-)
but, as a male, I would add one more dimension, to what is every son's fantasy that has a "Mommie" fixation. In the paragraph offering Michael the four options for sexual contact, I would add to the third one the possibility of her pregnancy. When that possibility is a reality, there is NOTHING more powerful in the son's vision that replacing his father as the creator of new life in his mother's womb. That IS what the Oedipus Complex (in your story sans hatred for the father) is all about! (In your story I place her age as short of menopause.)
It was great and well written, but I have to say it is always a little tacky to reference your own stories within a story. It would have been more powerful without the specifics. Everything else was thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks for another great tale.
THIS story is DISGUSTING. but i do say- mucho well written. but DISGUSTING.
and I mean NEVER EVER... have son impregnate mother. I can believe (however unlikely) a mother fucking her son, but pregnancy??? NAHHHHH, that is for truly sick minds. You are a skilled writer and I have enjoyed your stories since 2010. Another 5 star submission.
Very sexy and hot story. I was hard through the whole story. I hope to read the follow up with the sister.
i very much enjoyed reading this story and will definatley now go and lokk at your other stories. Keep the wonderful work up.
This was a really good, dirty, fun story. The fact that it was so well written made it all the more enjoyable. Thanks!
i really do. you just need to follow it up with how he gets his sister in the mix and a little on how life turns out with her strong personality. hopefully shes different then "mommy" on the inside
Excellent story with a Mom at turns domme and willing sub. Loved it!
Just a perfect slut.
I wish i could have such mom in my bed.
such a sexy, erotic story! i love the slow seduction. i can't wait to see how she can seduce her strong-willed daughter! i hope his nerdy friend gets a little action from mom too.
A good build up with the slow seduction mom done on her son and the very erotic sex that they had made this story one of the best...
Thanks for the read
This fine story was recommended to me by VWC10 ... whose bride shared it with him. Is she the "Mommy" who is seductively encouraging her male admirers to Take Charge? I believe this 'training manual" can empower you, or anyone to find a new way make your woman feel needed and loved with confident direction and a firm cock and hand. Don't let Michael become too arrogant!
very good story hope to see him do sis and maybe bring his friend from school in to double team his mom
Great story keep them coming. I defenetly want to read more on this story or any other u write. I'm a big fan. Great work
This is the sexiest story i have read... it got me so hard, I'm new to this but my cock is covered in precum... once again amazing story
I can hardly wait for the next part with the stuck up sister offered up by his Mom!
Your story kept me on the edge of my seat and my cock a diamond cutter. Can't wait for more, as you opened so many possible encore opportunities. Just sign me an absolutely enthrawed stocking lover & mixing it with the incest .... oh yeah!!!!
Hope the sister is way more reluctant before giving in, than the Mother was!
So smooth and flowing. I was up there on the mountain from beginning to end pausing only twice for impossible to stifle twitches. I just could not allow a big one to interrupt the read.
I hope the sister act is being developed, silkstockinglover makes my fav's.
I love this story. The plot, the rise and fall, everything I think I am still high and horny due to the riveting words of this story.
This is the best story I have read on here, I would surely love a sequel to this one.
i loved the story. i would love to read more about mommy-slut and her nerdy son as well as both getting his sister.
I love how she sees what he's been reading, and it includes the story "Pet Mommy," which is this story!
Loved it want more please, Have always wanted a mommy like that. Please write the next chapter with the sister and make it really HOT and DIRTY.
And here I thought this story was hot enough as it was until involving the daughter, too.... Damn! The buildup was as amazing as the sex itself. I have a new favorite author ;)
I one, a solid fan of your work. Two, coming back for more all the time, but three I am sad that you have stories like this that hint to a whole new story and i never see anything about it
For all hoping for a sequel part two is in early draft form and will be done for late 2012 or early 2013. A third part will come out in 2013.
Please be patient as I write contest stories, fan requests and other sequels.
Jasmine
COULD NOT HAVE BEEN BETTER, NOW FOR HIS SISTER. MAYBE HIS PAL FRED. AFTER HE HAS HER FIRST, AND MOM FOREVER. PLEASE KEEP IT GOING. A FAN FOREVER MORE MORE MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it.....especially the tantalising foot rubs and the ultimate foot job! Hope she seduces Cheryl using the same tactic and does her the same way.
Bits of this was close to my past experiences. You write well . Glad I found this site. You have a nice fan base . Please continue . Thanks .
Awesome story hope you write another would love to read about mommy-slut and sister-slut ;)
oh my god.....i am so hott rite now. please continue. can't wait till he fucks his sister. i am a foot freak and i loved the foot massages. your stories are incredible.
ARE ALL NERDS LIKE THAT, I MYSELF DON'T KNOW OF ONE THAT SHY.AND TO READ LITEROTICA AND NOT KNOW ABOUT NUDE DAY. I GUESS THAT'S WHAT VIDEO GAMES DO TO OUR YOUNG PEOPLE TODAY. IF IT'S NOT BLOOD AND GUTS, OR SOME WEIRD FANTASY WORLD, THEY DON'T KNOW SHIT. IT WAS A GOOD STORY, BUT WHAT HAPPEN TO FRED...........................LAROC OF AGES
Hey, Anonymous-Gross, If this is so disgusting and immoral to you, why are you reading it?
Grinning and wanted to tell you how much I liked this and will be reading more. Thank you
Pet Mommy, One of the best stories on this or any site. Hope you have more parts planned after pt 3. Can't wait to read lots more about "Pet Mommy"
A very good story and can't wait to read the next episode. Very hot and had me playing with myself and using my vibrator. More please!!
Gloria.
i was in love with my mom that i try to make love to her at the age of 13.
but she scare me to much that i stop playing with my dick 4 over 6 months
i would like to read more about u and your mother and sister.
from Master David
(like a child) says. A submissive woman should know that.
A very stimulating story! I was never sexually aroused by my mother, but two of my cousins were favorite arousing fantasies --- a first-cousin with sexy legs who enjoyed showing them to me in short-shorts (and seemed to enjoy my appreciative gaze), and a second-cousin who always greeted me with a lingering kiss. They both continue to be among my favorite muses.
Loved the story especially with the nylons, I've been stealing my moms pantyhose since I was 9. When I finally was able to cum, I'd return the heavily stained hose back in her drawer. I knew she knew it was me, when I was 13 or 14 she would always ask me to help her her shoes on while wearing shiny tan pantyhose, or an ankle bracelet. Once, we were home alone & she asked me to help her get dressed for some pictures she was going to take by a studio. We were in her bedroom she had 2 pair of my favorite pantyhose I'd always masturbate in, one darker share than the other but both shiny silky tan pantyhose. She explained to me that she had just did her nails & needed my help putting on the pantyhose so they don't rip. Believe me, this is a VERY TRUE story & I've been meaning to write about it for some time now! I'm 40 & married and still masturbate in my wife's pantyhose thinking about that day!
I had fantasies about my Mother when I was growing up She was a nurse so she always wore dresses and hose to work That was the uniform of the day at that time She was very tall and slender with beautiful legs and a quick smile I never got to do anything with her in reality but this story is very close to many of my fantasies involving her
Fuck great to talk about his sister while screwing his mum.
I used to wank into my mums knickers saw her tits and cunt
Lots.Wish I had the courage to have Fucked her.
Brother, the title of the story says it all. Mother Betty is and has been one amazing slut!! It does appearr, however that she might just be reining her herd in to just doing her son, Michael, and bringing in her daughter, Chrystal. Now with Mother being such an incestual free-spirit and limiting her range to just her kids, her son being insatiable and also possibly her daughter, there will be some some hot, Hot, HOT times down on the old farm!!!
In fact, that scenario, Mother Betty, Son Miichael and Daughter Chrystal, doing everything that two females and one male can do in the bedroom, Michael taking his girls out on the town without underwear, flashing, blouses unbuttoned, maybe some late evening public naked strolls, having the girls suck at some glory holes. But last but not least, keep the story pure and incestual with ONLY the three Lodge incestual family members! And at least one or even both ladies get pregnant (as part of their submissive roles)!
The story moves along at a very good pace, the dialogue is great, the character develped with good images and visuals. Mother Betty is totally PERFECT in her role, without abuse, disrespect, everything totally consensual, but erotic and lurid!
What crapola. I started with a hard-on and by page 2 I had lost it and my gf who gives great head could't get it back. I should sue for alienation of tumesence
I have recently found your stories and must say they are very well done. I really liked this one and think you have a talent for erotic story telling. Keep writing, I look forward to reading many more of you excellent pieces.
Wish I had the courage to do the same with my son and daughter. Maybe when they're older........
Incest stories like this are just too fantastic for me to find erotic. For erotic fiction to have its intended effect, there needs to be an element of the plausible. I can't find anything remotely plausible about a young woman banging her mom, except I guess for some elements of society that are so far on the edge through drugs or other derangement that, though unimaginable, it is yet possible.
In the kitchen her cunt is "freshly shaved" later it it "freshly trimmed"
Which one was it??