Midnight Visits

What a bitch

This girl has rocks for brains, She should move out and see what happens. If daddy really cares he will take action. I still love the story and am looking forward to more.

expecting

I usually don't read impregnation stories, but this one was very good. I loved how the father was taking advantage of her, and she knew it, but still needed him.

Horny or what? Fuck, this is a good story, devious little bitch of a daughter though, she'll get her man soon enough.

Great story!! Add more!!

Very Sexy

What a great story. Only wish it was me being fucked by my daddy. I think about it regularly wishing my dad would come in and fuck me. I listen as he fucks my mum and play with my clit. Please write more stories like this.
Julie

Powerful

Powerful and haunting! What a wonderful voice, so lyrical, so poetic. PLEASE keep writing! This is great stuff.

Love it

I loved it please do a part 2

Alsome story. Is there a part 2 or more?

More please

A new point of view for this category (taboo).
Yes, I would like to see a part 2 of that story.
Thanks for sharing ;)

hot

smart, sexy writing! I hope you're working on part 2. :)

poor lil misguided souls

Why in the hell would a 20 year old still be at home putting up with this idiocy? She needs to get away; figure out what she really wants; get involved with others. That would also force Daddy's hand; as she's already figured out, why can't he "have his cake and eat it too". He's already got it.

Nothing has been explained as to why Dad & Step-Biotch are still together; maybe Daddy's waiting for a huge settlement, an inheritance on her side; he wants to get his share before they divorce. I can't see any other reason except he likes having sex with both since nothing is forcing his hand.

I really rather like the story; for some completely illogical reason, but all three characters need to get their heads out of the asses. Dad doesn't deserve his "loving daughter, and maybe he does deserve the Biotch", Daughter deserves much better than what she's getting. Since we haven't been introduced to Biotch; we can only assume that she deserves to be used, abused and hung out to dry when he's done with her.

In the end; I wish for good things for the daughter, but don't think that Daddy's the answer. Give me her number; I'm more than willing and interested in taking over that position.. with a lifetime of TLC and hot, hard, sharing, caring SEX.

DKP

I liked it too much

Fantastic story. It wasn't just pump and shoot. The sex was almost passionate and her jealousy made her need that much greater. Awesome story. Well written.

So hot

This story was so hot. I thoroughly enjoyed how you fleshed out the characters. The sex scene was fantastic, not rushed, just right. I think this deserves a second chapter with the daughter moving out to force daddy's hand. Once daddy got divorced the daughter could start with her plan to get pregnant by daddy as every daughter should.

I laughed my arse off at the ending! In a good way!

I was wondering if she was on birth control, but I was pretty sure she was...reading that last sentence made me burst out laughing, lol. I just pictured the look on his face when he finds out. Oh shoot...I'm still chuckling! Original? Maybe not. But excellently executed! It's rare that a 1 page story can make me laugh like that. Heck, multi page stories don't do it very often! Five hysterical stars!

I laughed my arse off at the ending! In a good way!

I was wondering if she was on birth control, but I was pretty sure she was...reading that last sentence made me burst out laughing, lol. I just pictured the look on his face when he finds out. Oh shoot...I'm still chuckling! Original? Maybe not. But excellently executed! It's rare that a 1 page story can make me laugh like that. Heck, multi page stories don't do it very often! Five hysterical stars!

As it should be

Awesome story. A father's place is deep inside he daughters tight pussy and filling it with his cum and making her pregnant. I fucked 2 babies in to my daughter and we still fucked after she got married that's how she got the 2 kids. She would fuck her husband when she wasnt fertile and came to her daddy when she was.

Wish my dad did this

Been trying to get my dad to fuck me but not working love these stories though they give me loads of ideas

Hell, scream out loud while daddy fucks you! Let her hear and catch you! Hell, she can't prove anything, heh, well until you turn up pregnant! Most likely though she already knows that daddy is fucking you and is ok with it, heh. Really, who goes all night all the time without realizing their spouse isnt in bed with them? Lol.