All Comments on 'What She Never Told Me'

I don't care to read lesbian shit on the incest site. it should allays be on the lesbian site. Don't want to read this shit only a one. If ti could have been less it would have

If you don't want to read it then just move along & let those of us who do to enjoy the story. Personally, I'd like to read more!

As far as which story category to submit under anyway. I love the moral outrage though, especially at a story that was clearly labeled as both incest and lesbian if you bothered to read the description.

Anony three: thanks for being both coherent and not an asshat.

I like reading about girl on girl sex and this being three girls was great, making it even hotter that two were sisters.

ANONYMOUS if you don't like reading about girl on girl sex no one was forcing you and it was incest.

Anon 2, why would you post that here..?

Anyway, loved the story, love your writing, thanks bunches!

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for the great read!

Well, me again. Just finished this one. 5/5.

Thanks for the fun!

I just love the story .. please do write more of these .. I do love incest sisters.. n as a lesbian I was up in heaven .. :) thank u sooo much 10/10 !

Loved this story! Kinda reminded me of my little sister ;)

The narration was relatable and lighthearted, with wit for good measure; it felt like it was coming from a real person instead of a stunted writer just trying to get to a sex scene. Of course, the sex scenes were erotic and enjoyable as well. This is one of the best-written stories I've found on this site.

-lionshell

My name is Bob

I always loved lesbian erotica, but lesbian + incest is quickly becoming my favorite combo, sister love perhaps even more so than mother/daughter. I'd love to read a sequel in which Jen and Mel team up on Cindy, sucking her perky nipples and eating her out :)

I have to admit there was a little bit of a twist I didn't see coming... I really thought Jen was going to dislike Cindy due to jealously. I applaud you for keeping me on my toes. By the way, you are my favorite author, thank you very much!

That was a really good story, keep it up :)

Great story, characters, detail and build up. Not to mention excellent sex scenes! Me an my girlfriend played along with the story masturbating and making out to many great orgasms! MMMMM! Thank you! Laura x

This story was quite amazing! I like the girlfriends bringing in the sister storyline (or perhaps it's the sisters bringing in the girlfriend?). Either way, I loved this story and I look forward to more if you continue it! :-)

Very very yummy indeed! Thank you!

Love the characters, loved the story, the humor, the easy lightheartedness, the sensuality. The pacing was good and the resolution was heartwarming.

Good (not so) clean fun and everything a short story needs in spades.

But the problem is, this was the last story I had to read from your work, so now we have a problem, or, if I might put it, you have a problem :P

I hope you understand you will have to write some more stories to keep me happy

;)

anyway... great works

Can't really say more than what's already been said, other than 5 Stars and an instant Favorite!

Wet, wetter, ohhhhhh! Hmmm...I feel much better now.

You write really well. More, please. :-)

I wish I had words for how great that was.

But my brain's a bit muddled if you know what I mean..

I got so wet I need more ;)

The story is just awesome! Your style of interaction and dialog between the characters is amazing and so believable it make for an easy read. I felt like I was right there with them, even if it did get a little crowded in the tub for a while :) Thanks

Keep em coming!!!

Superb. Some might say a bit simple on the character and plot department... but clear, charming and very sexy. Great natural dialogue too, as Xarth always writes. What's not to like?

In response to the dick who only gave this story a 1, and would have given lower if they could, there is one lower, and that's to not rate it at all. It doesn't matter if a story fits into more than one category, you rate the story based on how well it was written. And as always with Xarth stories, thats 10/5...

This was hot as fuck! Heh heh, Giggity Giggity GOO!

Nice and HOT.

Very nicely written. Also very hot. Just well done overall. 5 stars 🌟.

Bill S.

Well that relationship is doomed and when it comes crashing jen will be left with the short end of the stick cause mel won't stay with her she will want to keep having sex with her sister she was already cheating on mel with her sister for God nows how long before the start of this the start of their doomed relationship so much for not wanting to lose her what a joke

That was lovely. A bit predictable, but lovely still for the way that Jen simply rolled with the unfolding situation. She loved Mel and realized that what Mel had with her sister Cindy was different, special, and very deep, likely by a decade more than her relationship with "the older sister" in this crazy triad. The way it unfolded was hardly "cheating," as it was all above board and out in the open. Cindy may be a "brat," but it was clear that she was a loving brat and could extend that to her older sister's partner without shame but at the same time with a lot of passion. Jen realized that she was being invited in to a beautiful, loving relationship with these two delectable sisters. Lord knows there are worse arrangements. If Jen really loves Mel, and Mel accepts her and her life-long loving relationship with her sister, then that becomes the "new normal." Maybe in a few months or a year Cindy decides to move on. What was lost by being accepting the love of the two sisters. Being petulant and possessive would end the Jen-Mel relationship sooner than possible jealousy of Jen for Cindy coming between the two sisters. She was being asked into that world and accepted; end of judgement because that acceptance includes the unfolding future for all of them. I think it is a beautiful thing. But that is just my opinion.

The suspension of disbelief is too high in this story for me. I bailed halfway through. I’ve read many incest stories that were believable and many lesbian stories that were believable. This wasn’t believable.

Also you missed many places where you could have added some feeling. When their bodies were touching everywhere in the tub, you could have added what she was feeling. Did she get goosebumps, did her heart race?

I didn’t rate this story, mostly because I didn’t finish it, so I didn’t ding your score. I for one needed more feeling.