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Caleb Woke Up Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/22/12

Aureola

Not 'aureola.' Should be 'areola' or 'areole,'

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by McBacon06/22/12

thanks - areole

I actually looked it up while writing the chapter, and still got it wrong.
Appreciate the feedback. I am looking to improve my writing skills.
This site is like a perverted English writing class.
How many times has that story been done.
The student wrote a paper that was over the line and too hot. The teacher couldn't contain herself. Such passion in his words.

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by Scotsman6906/22/12

In fact

the singular is 'areola'. The plural is 'areolae'. (The word is Latin.) A dictionary is a wonderful thing, rather neglected by some writers on Lit.

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by McBacon06/22/12

Thanks Scotsman69

This seems like just the thing an erotica writer would get good at, like the way a cook is judged by how well the do eggs. OK, so maybe nothing like that.

I used the look up feature in word to find the correct word usage/definition. So as best I can figure, I just need to work on my copy and paste skills (among many other things.)

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by Scotsman6906/22/12

McBacon

don't trust online guidance if you want to write well. Invest in a good dictionary. Like, a book? Paper and all that. In the UK the Oxford is the best. In the US I don't know, maybe Webster's?

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by McBacon06/23/12

Scotsman69 - I respect your dedication.

I will consider your advice.

I have a hard cover Websters that is probably 20 years old, but I am a little more trustworthy of online than you.

MS Word does a look up using Encarta, and it had it right. I just checked. It just doesn't have a copy paste option. Next time I would probably jump to Google to do the look up.

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by Anonymous06/24/12

dictonaries

Both Webster and Oxford have a good online dictionary and thesarus that they update regularly. I use both a lot if that could help you out.

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by Anonymous08/23/14

Very Nice!

I'm enjoying Caleb's careful development, and the much more exponential development of the females in the story as they fall under the spell of the necklace. Gretchen is a very good bridge for the very naïve Caleb to cross, as he works his way progressively through his sister to his HOT mom. Thank you again!

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