by oggbashan
I have been reading your work for some time now and this one did not disappoint. I, too, am a dirty old man. I just wish that I had Merlin's ability to satisfy my curiosity.
I'd give this effort a higher mark than the other, right on theme for the contest, dialogue is good if slightly too hip for the period.
Ending just pops up, well done to keep it a surprise.
I liked it, probably not a contest winner, but a good story.