Naked Nimue

A Nice Little Story

I have been reading your work for some time now and this one did not disappoint. I, too, am a dirty old man. I just wish that I had Merlin's ability to satisfy my curiosity.

that's it?

Is that the entire story or am I missing something?

Made me laugh

That's a riot man. Thank you.

Cute

I'd give this effort a higher mark than the other, right on theme for the contest, dialogue is good if slightly too hip for the period.

Ending just pops up, well done to keep it a surprise.

I liked it, probably not a contest winner, but a good story.

Hilarious. Probably not a contest winner but this genuinely made me giggle.