Never Have I Ever

Good Start

Good start to a hot story. Can't wait to read more. There is a few things grammatically wrong, but other than that, it was great.

keep em cumming

we need more, next chapter please.

Wow!!

Talk about revenge of the nerds! Next chapter please!

great story; make another chapter asap

Great literary. My turn.....

Your story moved along at the right pace. It was erotic and fun to read.

very hot

omg tht was so hot. Wish i had a good sister like tht

Amazing, with a hint of grammatical errors

Your grammar had some problems here and there through out, it barely took away from the fabulous erotic story. It was good because it had a good pace, and it felt possible, like this could possible happen.

Now I think that the way you eneded it could lead to one of two things, either another story based on Sammy going to this college with his sis, or just a continuation of this story and the fun encounters with the room mates. both of these ideas I would read, but then again, I'm sure that you could easily enough get me to read many things. I'm going to now have to go check out some more of your work. Keep up the story telling, I;m dieing to read them.

Good read

Good read, fun story
Guess the next chapter all three girls are going to wear the poor kid out his first time.
He won't be so shy now that he knows he has something women want, but he also needs to learn to eat pussy.

Great Story!

Would love to see this go another chapter at least. Adrianne and Carrie need to get in on that!

Never

Loved it. Hope to see more of them.

Wow

Loved it!

awesome

this is one of the greatest stories i have read on this site please continue if you plan it right this could be a 6 to 10 ch series i really hope you consider it

I agree with smartest guy

Definitelynpotential for an awesome series and a great story

Four years of college...

he'll have a BA and she'll have a Masters. They can live together and share their place and each other with Adrienne. That could be good for ten or so chapters.
Thanks for a great story if it stays alone and thanks for a great beginning if you turn it into a series.

Fucking great!!!

Been reading stories on this site for awhile now and this is the first time I've commented deff a great start! Very errotic and good story all together. Keep writing more five star chapeters to add to this and ill read anything you right. For sure 6-10 more chapters outta this begining. Seems like the natural progression would be to have him start school there and move in with his sis and the roomates...... look forward to more of this story!! Keep up the good work.q

great story, although I wish there had been more interaction with all of them, in the story it seemed that the brother had an interest in Carrie at first, then he was only interested in Adrienne when she came out of the bathroom, and then the "surprising" ending with his sister. I sure hope there's gonna be a sequal to this story, keep up the great work!

I want to read about what Adrienne had him do to her..

Sammy seemed to have the hots for his sister even before he went into her bedroom,
and I'm glad he got to have all three holes of his sister. Now how is she going to be able to keep her hands off of him when they go home for the christmas break.

A great story and hope to read more soon.

Thanks for the read.

add more

great storie, should bring roomates in and add more with sister

Fun story

I liked this story, although it could've used a bit more detail during the intimate scenes. Only a small critique, but never the less I enjoyed the story and hope you continue with more chapters on Sammy's adventure with his sister and her room mates. Keep up the good work!

Follow on

Dont end it there. Please give us a sequel!

I'm with the last guy keep it going.

Outstanding!

great story

keep it going let the roomates get a chance

Damn

What a hot, sweet, caring sister

damm

keep it going

This story is SCREAMING for a follow up.

Great story

Omg! Awesome story and get those roommates in on the action

The story MUST be told!

I've never commented on a story, but this one needs continuing. Please bring the other roommates in on the action! You setup a VERY hot scene and it should be continued!

NEVER SAY NEVER

and try to mean it. TK U MLJ LV NV

Continue.

Like other people have said I think you should continue the story to incl ude the other room mates. Great story very well written.

Nice.

Well done story, from sisters point of view.

Great Read!

Good job, YKN! Nice build up, with the game and all. And I loved how hot Sammy and Lynn were for each other. For my part, I hope you continue the story.

Wow

That was...incredible! a few typos here and there and a few words missing...but that was HOT!!! My suggestion? Write more stories like this!

Great story, nice to see the geeky kid nailing the hot chicks! One being his sister just makes it hotter!

More please

I/we would like to see what else these two achieved together and with the roommates, and who knows who else.

Definatly do a sequel!

GREAT TALE / TAILS

FAN-FUCKING-FUCKTASTIC

WOW.

You have an amazing talent write another story. (:

MAGNIFICENT BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE DON'T LET THIS BE THE END. THERE YOUNG THIS STORY COULD GO ON AND ON. KEEP IT CUMMING, HA HA. A FAN FOREVER MORE MORE MORE

Mixed review

It was a great setup and a very hot story. I'd say the story really needed some editing, words missing, or just sloppy grammar errors that detracted. Normally I get very turned off by bro/sis stuff, but this wasn't too bad.

deserves a 5

ok, a few typo problems but no biggy. been there. i thought the set up, descriptions, dialogue, pace were all great. you tried to give it a natural development. moment that she crawled to him and start fellating him a bit abrupt but also a wonderful moment in the story. and excellent idea to move from game to bedroom. also quite pleased that (1) the sister was small breasted and (2) they moved on to anal. maybe linger on the sexual ecstasy moments more? maybe more expression of intimacy during? lately haven't read much good here; nice to find a good one for a change. will check out your other stories.

Minor Issues

Sometimes you lose the verb tense and noun...I am not an English teacher, but he and she are pretty important...good story though with minor crap wrong..an editor would be cranking off while he/she was fixing the verbiage.

fantastic

A gripping sexy story, loved the sex and the bonding.plz make it into a long serial...plzzz

very hot

Very hot......would love to hear more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

I would love to see more, as long as it doesn't get angsty, I'll happily keep reading.

So simple but so well written

The idea of the 'never have I ever' game is simple but you make it works great.

It beguns to loosen up the brother but it's everybody who become a little crazy.

bloody hell!

wow what a hot story i cum twice and my cock is still hard.

Wow

Insanely hot.

Freaking awesome! Yowza! Lol uuugggg makes me wish I wasn't single for once! Lol

EDIT EDIT EDIT EDIT

please learn to either properly edit your stories yourself or learn to use a GOOD editor. you stupid errors ruin the flow of the story and keep readers away from the rest of your stories NO ONE WANT TO STOP AND FIGURE OUT WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO SAY.