Good starting would like to know a little more about the dragon prince and his background but all in good time... other than that I can't wait for the rest of the story to take place
Thanks for the words of encouragement guys and gals. Sorry about the delay in the second installment. My wife and I are going shuffled around the country. life is hectic and I just recently lost my job, but on to the good news! My wife and I will be working on another installment! She has been bugging me to continue writing with her, she hopes to eventually create some form of income from stories like this so the more feedback we get, the better. Hopefully in the next week or so we will have another story but for now I have to find a way to raise $250 to keep the roof over our head.
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Anonymous02/02/13
Ah!
I will sell my soul for you to keep this going! = D
The next installment of To the Palace is coming soon. My wife has finally decided to keep this one going. :) She should have it done and sent off for approval within the week. Keep an eye out for it!
Chapter 2 has just been submitted for approval! Literally just finished writing it and I really hope you enjoy reading it as much as I found myself enjoying writing it! Things are seriously heating up!! Be on the look out!!
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interesting beginning, would like to see what happens next.
great so far
Good starting would like to know a little more about the dragon prince and his background but all in good time... other than that I can't wait for the rest of the story to take place
I enjoyed you story as well :)
nice!
Cant wait to read more, keep up the good work
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Thanks for the words of encouragement guys and gals. Sorry about the delay in the second installment. My wife and I are going shuffled around the country. life is hectic and I just recently lost my job, but on to the good news! My wife and I will be working on another installment! She has been bugging me to continue writing with her, she hopes to eventually create some form of income from stories like this so the more feedback we get, the better. Hopefully in the next week or so we will have another story but for now I have to find a way to raise $250 to keep the roof over our head.
Ah!
I will sell my soul for you to keep this going! = D
another one
Please write more!!
You'll be pleased to hear...
The next installment of To the Palace is coming soon. My wife has finally decided to keep this one going. :) She should have it done and sent off for approval within the week. Keep an eye out for it!
Exciting new installment!!!
Chapter 2 has just been submitted for approval! Literally just finished writing it and I really hope you enjoy reading it as much as I found myself enjoying writing it! Things are seriously heating up!! Be on the look out!!
I like it
Great chapter. Not too fond of slave trading but I'll check out the next chapters.
Thanks for posting!
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