All Comments on 'The Carousel'

by Maria2394

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meisteremeisterealmost 12 years ago
Good job!

A bit of froth and lightness in a literary realm often more grim than sexual, more sadistic than sensuous. Very enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wonderful story

Even though this isn't my kind of fantasy, the story telling was so good, I was captured. Especially wonderful to see how you stuck to the slow steady pace so the erotic tension built. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A sweet story!

I enjoyed this romantic and sexy little story - thank you for writing it and bringing it to us. Five stars - well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
beautiful story

You hit a wonderfully perverse nerve! I loved every word of it!

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
What a great little story!

You built the tension well, even to the surprise ending, and we're left hoping the "new panties" aren't just "granny panties of a different color than white"! :) Well done! One can only wish Dan and Claire well!

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