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by Anonymous

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by tazz31706/22/12

A FULL OUTBOX IS AN INDICATOR

of closure or facts. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by raconteuse06/24/12

This poem

was mentioned in the new poems listing for yesterday. Congratulations on making a splash with your first poem: "Scotsman69, prolific Lit story author, posts his first poem: "Empty". Aphoristic, and only eight words, so I'll just let you read it yourself.
I liked it.

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by njoyjade06/24/12

Silence speaks volumes,

these eight words do as well! :)

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by demure10106/29/12

It took Dorothy Parker

five pages (in A Telephone Call) to say roughly the same.

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by DawnJ07/06/12

I hear the silence...

...and it calls to me.

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by Anonymous07/25/12

An apology

My outbox has gone South ... Or to sleep zzzzzzz

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by Anonymous08/06/12

my

inbox is empty too

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by BlueStarGrrrl08/10/12

Good Lord, Scotman69

As if you ever have an empty inbox ;)

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by Anonymous03/09/14

May I help fill that in box? I'm just acuriousflower, you know...

I'm just acuriousflower, you know...

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by Scotsman6903/10/14

Thank you,

anonymously curiousflower. My inbox could do with filling...

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