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of closure or facts. TK U MLJ LV NV

was mentioned in the new poems listing for yesterday. Congratulations on making a splash with your first poem: "Scotsman69, prolific Lit story author, posts his first poem: "Empty". Aphoristic, and only eight words, so I'll just let you read it yourself.

I liked it.

these eight words do as well! :)

five pages (in A Telephone Call) to say roughly the same.

...and it calls to me.

My outbox has gone South ... Or to sleep zzzzzzz

inbox is empty too

As if you ever have an empty inbox ;)

I'm just acuriousflower, you know...

anonymously curiousflower. My inbox could do with filling...

and 2 syllables each to the 2nd and 3rd line to make it into a haiku.

Voilà: Your inbox is empty no more.