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Katrina Meet John Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/01/13

nice

story, great so far but you need an editor

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by honeybree01/01/13

5!

This started the new years off right! Great start can't wait to dig into more of this story.

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by casemgr01/01/13

Interesting, but grammatical errors detract

The story is good, but there are so many grammatical errors that they detract from what I'm reading. There are spelling errors, grammar errors, changing between tenses. Please, get an editor before submitting the next chapter. Thank you.

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by cullensjonas01/01/13

sorrry didnt mean to upload until my editor edit it

so it wont happen again. forgive me viewers

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by Anonymous01/01/13

this is more like a noncon story and so far he has done nothing but order her around and use her virgin status to bend her to his will.

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by Anonymous01/03/13

Update more pls

I Loooooooooove it. I want a John in my life lol. This story is hot keep on with the updates

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by Buxombeauty203/15/13

re More Please

Enjoying the story. So ready for another update!

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by Anonymous10/09/13

Omg! When will you post another!!? This is soooo good!

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by chocolatesista11/07/13

Please write more, its really good

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by cullensjonas11/08/13

hi everyone

sorry for not posting but dont worry i have to short update coming

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by Anonymous01/11/14

UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!

This was pretty good but it would have been great without the grammatical errors. Even with that anxiously awaiting the update!! Hurry please.

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by Anonymous07/28/14

Omg

Yes please i gotta know what happens next.... And thank you for the details on Katrina...

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