by dreamsex1130
Your paragraphs are a bit too long the story would read much easier if you broke them up and separated dialog from the rest of the narrative.
The sub title/description is a little vague, or is it misleading, here.
My first thought was "How will she know she will be in love with him 8 years from now and why is that important to this story.
Then I realized you meant after they had been separated for 8 years. I have not read the story yet, hope the rest is free of ambiguous statements.
"A woman runs into the boy she was in love with, after 8 years." is worded a little better.
Also we have a woman and a boy, might it not be better to refer to them in same age terminology?
You have created a verbal optical illusion.