All Comments on 'Fair Chance'

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SwanswartSwanswartover 11 years ago
A narrative poem that will not be finished after one reading.

This poem could have settled for a familiar arc, but I like the twist at the end; Well done.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A CAROUSEL, A FERRIS WHEEL AND A TILT-A-WHIRL

even all the excitements cant sustain the hope. TK U MLJ LV NV

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I believe in Kindness, God , Joy , The Holy Spirit: all of which guide me !! When I meet someone I see the similarities and common bond of being born into the human race as equals. No one is any less or more important than me. As it should be.