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by Swanswart06/22/12

A narrative poem that will not be finished after one reading.

This poem could have settled for a familiar arc, but I like the twist at the end; Well done.

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by tazz31706/22/12

A CAROUSEL, A FERRIS WHEEL AND A TILT-A-WHIRL

even all the excitements cant sustain the hope. TK U MLJ LV NV

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