If this storywas inspired by Caroline, 34-DDD could be true!
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Anonymous06/25/12
Huh???
This is a stream of consciousness entry. There are many, many problems with it. For one, she's 22 and married, but we don't meet the husband. Speaking of which, is Daddy spending the night???
The Daddy here needs many many years of therapy, as I suspect of the author.
pretty good story a bit of a push but dont listen to the negative people. 34DDD is very believable. keep up the work
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Anonymous11/14/14
You are missing big points and lost a reader
Never finished.
REALLY?
And ASS to PUSSY causes infections, wow, um do some research and clear up your structuring. Try to NOT masturbate as you write and your head may think clearer. Also, ask someone to proof your work.
English
I quit
I quit reading when I hit the 34DDD or was it 34DDDD tits. Yes, it is usually a fantasy but not for me
If this storywas inspired by Caroline, 34-DDD could be true!
Huh???
This is a stream of consciousness entry. There are many, many problems with it. For one, she's 22 and married, but we don't meet the husband. Speaking of which, is Daddy spending the night???
The Daddy here needs many many years of therapy, as I suspect of the author.
Dont listen
pretty good story a bit of a push but dont listen to the negative people. 34DDD is very believable. keep up the work
You are missing big points and lost a reader
Never finished.
REALLY?
And ASS to PUSSY causes infections, wow, um do some research and clear up your structuring. Try to NOT masturbate as you write and your head may think clearer. Also, ask someone to proof your work.
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