All Comments on 'When Two Worlds Collide Ch. 02'

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warmicw30warmicw30almost 12 years ago
short!!!!

short but sweet,for me its like every time u come to the good part u just stop,so can u plsssssss lengthen your chapters

ps- every one love a cliff hanger, it what keeps readers coming back but no one love a hanger --length !!!

LucyKing101LucyKing101almost 12 years ago
Great Story

I think this is shaping up to be really interesting. You definitely have me hooked. You've obviously got talent, I hope you keep writing as I would really like to see where you take this. Thank you for all so far.

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickialmost 12 years ago
wow

it's getting good, keep writing because I am intrigued.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Read

It's official now.

I am addicted to this story.

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Start!

Please carry on with this story, you certainly have my attention now.

csweetnesscsweetnessalmost 12 years ago

Great start can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
hooked already

please post more soon.

catman71catman71almost 12 years ago
wanting more

in no order, what is she, who is she running from, and why do i think she has just run smack into the

alpha, and he has ides?

PoisonlovePoisonlovealmost 12 years ago
short but good

straight to the point, good wording. thumbs up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Loved it!

Addicted:) please continue!

oneboobeeoneboobeealmost 12 years ago

Good start.....want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

donaldedonaldealmost 12 years ago
i am most interested in reading more

excellent chapter i can not wait to see what her other half is and how the residents are going to react to it

KittybalooKittybalooalmost 12 years ago

More more more!!!

lol Please =)

ladybug71ladybug71almost 12 years ago
Great beginning.....

I can't wait for the next chapter, so please post as soon as you can. Thank you! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
amazing

wow, you have me hooked.This is totally awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
omg

ok, i really really wanna know what happens next. very nice cliff hanger, by the way.

akadeejayakadeejayover 11 years ago
Liking alot!

I really like this story. Can't wait until you post more.

What happened to your Running Scared story?

jaafrica73jaafrica73over 11 years ago
loving this .....!

Can't wait for more.... :)

YannesYannesover 11 years ago

nice start hope you continue but . . . .WHAT THE HELL happened to Running scared please respost that story

MizTMizTover 11 years ago

Off to a really nice start w/these first two chapters. I have one more to read and then I'll be all caught up!

canndcanndover 11 years ago

I like the start. I enjoy these types of stories. The only thing is that I feel like she's not speaking like a normal person. I feel like she's either being melodramatic or something. It just feels awkward. I know she's supposed to have an edge b/c of whatever threat she is facing but she has such a nasty attitude which doesn't go with her looking down as to not challenge the weres, etc. It doesn't follow for me. She should either go with saying fuck it and not worrying about insighting them or get her attitude under control. Just some feedback I'd give if I were editing for you. I think you have a good beginning to the story and I'll keep reading.

storylover21storylover21over 11 years ago
Running Scared

I'm liking this story; I really am, but what happened to Running Scared if I may ask? That story was amazing and I was anticipating the next chapter.

fairy14fairy14about 9 years agoAuthor
Sooo sorry

I moved to another site and I have a site specific email account and I just haven't bothered with it. I just really hated the extremely long periods of time it took to upload a single chapter and then if I spotted an error I would have to go and resubmit o.O it just seemed tedious and unnecessary. I'm actually working on Chapter 12 of this story so I'm thinking about maybe posting story here as well since if feel bad for jumping ship without a word.

fairy14fairy14about 9 years agoAuthor
spellcheck

Stories* i* that's another thing...you can't edit/delete your own comments... Le sigh

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please let us know where you've gone

You are not the first writer to "jump ship," however most don't even tell us where they have gone, they just leave us hanging and waiting, which is uncool.

I would love to finish reading this story, please?

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 8 years ago
Curious

fairy14 moved to another site...

Anyone know where?

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