by YKN4949
Thats a really great start, I love how you had a great story about how the Dickgirls came to be and the ranking system too, its amazing and very original. I look forward to more!
dear god almighty
i'm pretty sure i've died and gone to heaven
i f-ing love these stories, they're so awesome and very erotic
the only thing i can ask/beg for, is for more :D
How about a story about a young virgin sailor who gets seperated from his ship. He ends up with at least one of each type then when word gets around the island, ends up getting gang-banged by as many hishes as possible.
Love the setting and detail but it is a bit rushed. I could have done with more teasing before you got down to the actual sex. Hope you return to San Clemente soon though!
Is it possible to get more stories about Andalee's time as a school teacher? And I'm loving this island!
Really like the focus on anal in this one(it's one of my big personal fetishes)
You have an amazing writing style and the focus of not only on the anal but also of both the girls growing curiosity and desires but also of the teachers was a wonderful stroke of genius. Well done i will certainly be ready the other stories about the island.
Add 2 more chapters to this one. One for each of the other classes andalee has. And then make a 4th chapter where all of her students are with her. Other than that great story. Really well written and good detail. Keep writing more stories about the island
I never thought a story about a group of sexy teenage futanari could be boring, but yeah, this one was. When you have six women involved in a sexual scenario, there just needs to be more substance. Much like your other stories, the sex was over in a flash and I was left wanting more. I also don’t care for futanari with ‘barely there’ dicks and I thought the whole ‘cumming while flacid’ thing was a bit silly. 2/5