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by Pete_L06/24/12

Not a great story

Sorry, very short and too little content, but even as short as it was, there were several errors of missing words that any editor would have picked up. You need to let someone help you with your writing if you are going to continue.

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by LikesGoodWriting01/25/13

So nice and compact

real life is not net and clean and sometimes too short.

but very satisfying !

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