All Comments on 'The Lap Dance'

by Sweetandsinful

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snixelpigsnixelpigalmost 12 years ago
great story

short and sweet reminded me of a real memory

2hot2m82hot2m8almost 12 years ago
Nice Sexy Swaying

The thought of your cheeks rubbing against my Throbbing Hard Cock would make me Burst!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
sexy

I'd love you to do that to me, so sexy and naughty...

simpletimessimpletimesover 11 years ago
Nice visual

Great short story, very visual in my mind. Very sexy.

GossamerThreadsGossamerThreadsover 11 years ago

Simply sublime and wonderfully complex. So beautiful and sensual and HOT. Your writing deftly conjures sound and touch and heat and scent and taste in me the reader - like I am there living it. Bravo.

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