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Love these thinking man's revenge stories

Unfortunately, IRL upon finding out you were being betrayed in this manner, I and most of the guys I know would only be able to connect enuf dots to be able to put 2 bottles of the H2O where the sun don't shine with respect to the 2 cheaters. LOL, 5*****

A good flash story

Enjoy an occasional BTB (burn the bitch) story in the LW section. But to my knowledge, the victim has no say regarding charges. Only the prosecutor and judge can affect the charges. Thanks for writing.

A surprise followed by a reaction.

Very fine revenge story. Nothing erotic but thought-provoking. The moral of the tale is to keep your own counsel.... and think before you act.

Fianlly, a story where hubby isn't watching them with his dick in his hand!

Good story. Thanks, keep em coming. We need more of these. 5* from me.

Vulcan it's called a victim impacted statement

Sometimes talking to the ADA can go along way
5stars

Nice to see a new story

It's great to see a new story much as I liked it I'm sad it was such a flash. Thanks gave it 5!

5 stars for an again MUTUALITY story. Moral? No! MUTUALITY!

Very good Modern Figaro Type Revenge Story and humorous. We can laugh on the cheating wife and the loverboy, for me it is unbilivable after 2000 (two thousands) years we are laughing on the cheating wives and the loverboys!!!!!!! Fantastic!!!!!! . I am glad others like the cold brain husband or the smart friend(s) of the husband revenge stories. I told in my many comments, against the idea of the loverboys-willing cuckolds-slut wives association the Modern Figaro Type revenge stories do not tell about any morality. They are pure mutuality on the top. The morality when let anybody do such thing to spike the mineral water with special poisons to put prison the loverboy and the cheating wife???? I wrote several times the cheating spouse lose the right of the fair treating from the betrayed spouse and with the cheating the mutuality means for the betrayed spouse she/he could do such things which is not guessed by any authority as Police, IRS, etc....and sometime the loverboy, misstress, wife, husband. This is the Modern Figaro Revenge Stories, main character is able to avoid the meeting with the authorities. The majority of the Cruel Revenge Stories is near to the 70 years ago cheating treating and in some stories the main character meets the Police as an accused or goes to the prison.
I have to admit the Romantic Revenge Stories are near to the moral, but the revenge stories only 20% is Romantic Revenge Stories. Unfortunately many Authors stopped writting their consequence stories before an imagined plus page which would have changed a good consequence stories to a better Romantic Revenge story (Sometime a good Romantic Revenge Story may also be humorous, as SS06 or Vulcez showed us . So we remain the MUTUALITY.

vulcan

a victim can influence charges though ultimately it is up to the da to decide the charges.In a case like this the da would prob go along with the victim which would allow them to plea bargain the case,saving the state a trial.Plus they might have trouble pinning attempted murder charges on them since they couldn't know which of them 'put' the poison in the water,all they could prove was the sleepibg powder.

Loved the dr. wojohowitz(spell it like you pronounce it) reference,barney miller fan I presume.

It was a good romp but I only gave it a one.

The affair was dumb and drugging the husband DURING the party was pure insanity. At most they would have been charged with delivery of a noxious substance and as a misdemeanor, probation or community service would have been the sentance.



What also bothers me is the idea that he is a "bottled water snob". That was a lousy plot device

some revenge on a cheating spouse

does the punishment fit the crime. i think not,but it is a story. he went to the extreme to set up this punishment by poisioning himself. it could have backfired.

Always look forward to a radk submission

Clever flash-story. Some funny lines, too.

Good Story

5* Best one on this site today Fun read. Great revenge

I was going to say!

I thought I missed this story! Nicely done. A flash story and straightforward but enough of a screw to make me happy for the ride.

Thanks

Excellent

Great tale about catching the cheating whore slut skank wife and her equally disgusting married lover. Yeah prison time will do them good. When they get out they can match butt-holes to see who's is bigger.

OH YEAH
HA Ha ha

to bad

you couldn't bottle that water and feed to the other authors who submitted stories in the loving wives genre today and as they are so fond of saying it is just a fantasy of mine.

Good Read!

Thanks for sharing.

'5'

only decent loving wives story today, the rest of the willing cuckolds suck

OH yeh 5x5

lol loved it, go with a sand wedge instead of bat

GUT REACTIONS AND GUT FEELINGS

sometimes leads to exuberance, TK U MLJ LV NV

most excellent

gave u a 5 - good flash story.

How is this a loving wife story?

Not that I did not like it but this catagory is a little diverse and this sounds like a revenge - hating wife story to me...Someone needs to write a better defination of "loving Wives" so the people who want to read a certain type wont be offended.

Great Drive By Story!

Thanks for sharing! How about another one?

Well planned...

but ended too quickly. It seemed like you got tired of writing so you just quickly ended the story rather than the attention to detail you used for the first part.

A little repeat

@ Anon I was explained the majority of the loving wives and her adventourous mate mean cheating wives (in minority cases TLW stories only). However the much majority of husbands (in the World) DO NOT LIKE EATING CREAMPIE or TURN ON seeing their wives were fucked strangers, collegues, best friends, etc.. So the Revenge, Consequence stories are parts of the menu of the LW. Sometime a reconcilation may be some chance so the reconcilation may be part of the menu of LW.
The categories of the LW hub's stories:
1. True Loving Wife srories (Surprisly there are stories where there is not any cheating)
2. Unwilling cuckold stories
2.1. Consequence stories
2.1.1. Simple Consequence stories (generaly divorce)
2.1.2. Running Husband stories
2.2. Reconcilation stories
2.2.1. Believable reconcialation stories
2.2.2. RAAC stories
2.3. Revenge stories
2.3.1. Cruel revenge stories (death, murder, serious injuries, poison,using contigous illnes as HIV, etc.)
2.3.2. Romantic Revenge stories
2.3.3. Modern Figaro type revenge stories. The smart husband story is not good name for them, because in some story the friend of the beaten husband is the smart brain! (the last 2 types are my favorits).
3. Clueless husbands stories
3.1. Bastard children/pregnancy stories
3.2. Short time affairs/flings stories
3.3. Long time affairs stories
4. Mutual connection stories
4.1. True wife-husband swapping stories
4.2. True swinging lyfestyle stories
4.3. True open marriage story (A little explanation what is the TRUE OPEN MARRIAGE, because the cuckolding is not open marriage. The open marriage 3 main rules are: a.) The common house is neutral place where the spouses do not bring his/her love partners. b.) Nobody tells or asks about the other spouse activities.
c.) The spouses avoid the STDs and the bastards.
5. Treesome stories
5.1. FMF stories
5.2. MFM stories
6. Willing cuckold stories (I do not think that husbands willing cuckold who wait with the divorce until his children have become 14-18 years old)
Those people who likes these stories should put them subdivisions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well done!

Great short tale!

Just Right

Short and to the limited point was just right. Embellishment of the affair or the labored thinking of the aggrieved husband would have ruined it. Fik\ve stars.

what the fuck is wrong with you morons....

...forget pissant mouses- you actually think this is good????????? no fucking background except one sentence about vanilla sex- the person that actually HAD to have been the one to concoct the "formula' trying to talk her out of it AFTER THE FACT,(if you're so stupid that you could even begin to question who made the shit you're not smart enough to argue with, or a nony mouse -same fucking thing...)- then he of course argues for leniency because why???? Thanks a lot author, you captured the complete imbecile crowd quite admirably. Pure shit! Now I'm convinced most of the readers here are fucking sad cubicle dwelling fat ugly losers that will cheer anything that has a woman eat it, regardless of how vacuous and schlerotic it is.No wonder Republicans keep winning.

After reading PISTOLPACKIN'S comments and opinions

in such an inarticulate structrue I think we all can realize who the real MORON is. He has such a high opinion of himself that we should all grovel at His Imperial Majesties feet. WHAT FUCKIN DRIVEL.

radk

can you send some water to pete, maybe he'll pass out and hit a tree *****

hates fags but...

loves blowing homeless guys in the alley, strange indeed.... mosey over to ---> Gay Male bucko

Thanks

Hey...it's a good story. I enjoyed reading it.

What A Great Short Story.

Short, but complete. I didn't feel like I was reading an unfinished story. I enjoyed the hell out this story and gave it a 5.

ped0

stay 300 yds away from the school you nonce!

I have no complaints

It was a flash BTB story. It accomplished what the author (presumably) intended: a gut reaction with no back story, character development, or rising conflict. Frankly, it's better than most postings in this category of late. I would have expected fewer usage errors in such a short story, but it was an okay bway to kill 20 minutes.

Cheers,
Wulf

Anonymous- what's inarticulate about my comment?....Do you even know what articulation means douchebag?

...and of course I seem to you like I have a high opinion of myself- I have to co-exist with banal morons like you. If I could I'd kill 90% of you cubicle dwelling planet destroying vermin. Have fun fucking your fat ugly wife, if you have one.

Anonymous- what's inarticulate about my comment?....Do you even know what articulation means douchebag?

...and of course I seem to you like I have a high opinion of myself- I have to co-exist with banal morons like you. If I could I'd kill 90% of you cubicle dwelling planet destroying vermin. Have fun fucking your fat ugly wife, if you have one.

Oh yeah...

...so sorry you were miffed because I pointed out you like crap. Bon appetite'.

loved it

That was a good story about a bad cunt getting hers. I thought at first he would fake sleep to catch.them in the act. Then I thought a nice car wreck, only if he took her car, but adding poisons and using ipecac was genius.

Revenge

Revenge and/or vindication ... Good to have some to counterbalance the wannabe sissyboy cucks.. I needed this to act as an antacid to pual pines dribble about his pathetic existence as a former man.

5 stars all the way for me. I guess this is what people call a "Passive"/ "Aggressive" attack. I'm still not why the wife thought she was doing the right thing and would get away with drugging the one she claimed to love, but the cheating wives and husbands do some strange and wierd things while cheating and disrespecting their partners. Thanks for the story I hope you continue to write more stories.

Loved it, an original twist on an old idea. 5*

Pistolpackinpete is a joke.

He recently claimed that he taught comp. lit. We only need to read his posts to know he doesn't have the intelligence to teach someone to use a ballpoint pen.
He doesn't even know the difference between a liberal and a conservative. He just thinks that Democrats are liberals and Republicans are conservatives.

He said in another post that Romney was a conservative.
Talk about not knowing anything.
That's like saying Rush Limbaugh is a liberal.
The Republicans haven't had a candidate very far right of Center since Reagan.

Pete I was wondering if your other handle is spelled DWornack.
The intelligence level is the same.
The only difference is that DWorknob only posted his stupidity once per story.
You are actually more like Harry who just keeps going and going and going...
Now that I look at it, he writes like just like the drunk Harry does. You know that same elegant articulate manner.

Don't usually like flash stories.

They often leave you confused and unsatisfied with lack of substance.
This one was a good story and just missed being a really good story.
You can't judge it against longer stories. It has to be take for what it is.
It certainly doesn't warrant an attack by the Great Unwashed.

While this was well worth the read, I agree with one poster that the end felt too rushed.

As for the setup and lack of background of the cheaters, I guess that could be a complaint for those who need every little thing spelled out for them.
But I thought it was fine.

Good story and thanks for the read.

PISTOL????PACKIN

Of course I understand the english language. I understand psychology too....If someone has to demean others to feel good about himself that person is insecure, irrational and a potential threat to himself and (not usually) others. So in language and style you may have a chance of understanding you reveal that the only pistol you could be packin is on your hip and an ugly wife must have yours beat by a country mile. Thanks for the fun.

Nice flash story.

Right to the point and easily read. Keep on writing. 5'

Looks like he found out just in the nick of time.

Nice flash story. Looking forward to your next one. Thank You.

loved it but wish he was more severe

Loved the story. Gave it a 5 star rating. I just wish he was more severe with her. Maybe there can be a part two in which she comes out of jail and he gets a bigger revenge... that would be nice.

Loved it

Great story

A nice complete short story

A well thought out tightly written revenge story.

Smooth flowing and quick paced.

Thanks for the good read.

Nice, short and to the point.

I really would have liked a chapter 2 though. Would have been interesting what happens when he tells his wife that he knew and set them up.