Really enjoyed this chapter, was almost expecting Alanna to fail Curtis' test! Was starting to get frustrated in previous chapters that Alanna was almost too submissive and I wanted her to object to being a "slave". Can almost see that happening in the distant future especially as she is intelligent and will eventually want more than being at home all day and waiting for Master to come back! However I reread all the chapters again and realised that it really was bad on her previous home planet and in fact she does have more freedom now. Can't wait for the final chapter and will be sad when this series ends as it really brightens my day when I see a new chapter online! Thank you.
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Anonymous06/26/12
Fantastic Writing
Goldeniangel,
I am new to the site and in love with this story. Your writing is excellent. I can feel the emotions of David and Alanna as if they are my own. The story line is very interesting and you write it with class. I look forward to reading much more from you. Great work.
I'm loving this series so much that I'm loathe to see it end.
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Anonymous06/27/12
Dear moderator be fast !
Goldeniangel already submitted the very last chapter but when i try to read it.. what i see is;
"This submission is awaiting moderator's approval
Then it will be accessible for browsing"
It pissed me off !!! I cant wait !!!
I'm addicted to your stories Goldeniangel.. you are amazing! and your stories are adorable !! It took my few hours to finish all the other chapters !! I'm sad that you finished !!
I can not bear that it's going to end, when there is still so much scope for this story. Why would you deprive me of my David and Alanna fix? Stellar job Goldeniangel, Thank you x
English
Another great chapter!
Really enjoyed this chapter, was almost expecting Alanna to fail Curtis' test! Was starting to get frustrated in previous chapters that Alanna was almost too submissive and I wanted her to object to being a "slave". Can almost see that happening in the distant future especially as she is intelligent and will eventually want more than being at home all day and waiting for Master to come back! However I reread all the chapters again and realised that it really was bad on her previous home planet and in fact she does have more freedom now. Can't wait for the final chapter and will be sad when this series ends as it really brightens my day when I see a new chapter online! Thank you.
Fantastic Writing
Goldeniangel,
I am new to the site and in love with this story. Your writing is excellent. I can feel the emotions of David and Alanna as if they are my own. The story line is very interesting and you write it with class. I look forward to reading much more from you. Great work.
Only one more?
Gah!
I'm loving this series so much that I'm loathe to see it end.
Dear moderator be fast !
Goldeniangel already submitted the very last chapter but when i try to read it.. what i see is;
"This submission is awaiting moderator's approval
Then it will be accessible for browsing"
It pissed me off !!! I cant wait !!!
I'm addicted to your stories Goldeniangel.. you are amazing! and your stories are adorable !! It took my few hours to finish all the other chapters !! I'm sad that you finished !!
Noo!
I like this story too much for it to end! I hope the last chapter is good and long! Good job on this one... really captivating and hot.
Why why why?
I can not bear that it's going to end, when there is still so much scope for this story. Why would you deprive me of my David and Alanna fix? Stellar job Goldeniangel, Thank you x
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