Taking Back Brooke

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Great storie.. makes me want to fuck my daughter so bad...

oh man, am so wet right now.

Wowza, that was amazing.

Wow

I'm not much on anger fucking, but this was great. I got into the story and easily imagined the whole scene. Great story.
RS

Nah

It's run it's course.

Nothing there to continue.

It wasn't bad. Move on and write another, rather than drag the dregs out of that one.

Hot, Hot, Hot...

This story is very well written and quite erotic. I would love to see more of these two.

omg!

please continue this story. it was sooo fucking hot.

omfg

wonderful! I am so wet now, wishing my daddy was here with me...

So fucking hot

Yea you should make another one I am SO fucking wet. You are a great incest writer and I would love to read more of your stories. Now all I need to do is find a guy who can fuck me aggressively hard like that. And I will be VERY happy ;)

My pussy is so wet. Wish my daddy were here to teach me a lesson, with his rock hard cock. I would spread my legs so wide for him to pump all of his warm cum deep inside.

Fucking hot

Dam I loved this I'm masterbating to this storie

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Please continue this awesome story!!

Really good!

Knock her up!!! ;)

So hot! Please continue! ;)

Yes, More Please!!!

Please consider adding another chapter to this story. The pacing and buildup was right on, and when you got to the sex; "First Rate" ! ! ! I would definitely enjoy reading more of this " New relationship reality " between Brooke and Dad. Thanks for a great read ! ¡ !

please continue this story.

Perfection

I lovend the perfection of the father - daughter sex you described. That's the perfection I try to reach too ... With my daughter.

Bravo... yet again!

Again you entice your readers with a wild and erotic adventure that flows very well! Again your attention to detail brings your engaging characters to life that entices the reader to crave more content.

PLEASE

PLEASE DON'T LET THIS BE THE LAST ONE! I adore this story and like your other works I wish you were my daddy.

Please continue!

This was so hot! You have to continue this story!!

Very stimulating!

Well written and extremely stimulating. One problem is the dads name changed from Dan to Mike.