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Good Job
Nice start. Can't wait for more. Thanks for your writing.
Awesome Start!
Wonderful story and I can't wait for chapter two. And last but not least, Thanks:)
great job!
For a first story it was really good! I'm looking forward to the second chapter.
More, more, more! Please...
what a nice beginning.... Please hurry with the next installment!
I submitted Ch. 2 yesterday, so I hope it will be up shortly...
there will be sexy scenes in the next chapter too!
Nicely done!
This is shaping up to be really interesting! Well done!
I have a feeling
that this is the start of a well written series and It's a pleasure to see that 3 chapters have already been posted. A 5 star beginning.
this is rather good.?
Jackson Browne
One of my favorites as far as classic oldies go, and a great way to begin your series. Liking this so far.
Casey 1988
I think this is going to be a great series.
You! Yeah you!
You made me all teary eyed at work!
Good work so far.
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