I liked it. Short, simple, not just all cum and fucking. There's an actual story here.
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Anonymous06/27/12
Well, this story is different. I didn't really understand it. But I loved the storyline and wouldn't recommend a part 2. And fuck you the 1 who said it was awful, i'd like to see you do better!
Thank you for the *polite* comments. I'll leave negative ones as long as they aren't rude. This story is 4 parts long. Chapter 2 was rejected for length but I fleshed it out and hopefully it'll be approved this time. ;) The story is roughly edited and I know I struggled with tense, but it was written for my husband and submitted here secondarily, so I'm not going to invest too much time in perfecting it. Thanks for reading.
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Anonymous06/28/12
Fair stab at a story . . .
. . . . . . . but as historically accurate as Braveheart or Carry on Cleo !
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I liked it. Short, simple, not just all cum and fucking. There's an actual story here.
Well, this story is different. I didn't really understand it. But I loved the storyline and wouldn't recommend a part 2. And fuck you the 1 who said it was awful, i'd like to see you do better!
Thank you for the *polite* comments. I'll leave negative ones as long as they aren't rude. This story is 4 parts long. Chapter 2 was rejected for length but I fleshed it out and hopefully it'll be approved this time. ;) The story is roughly edited and I know I struggled with tense, but it was written for my husband and submitted here secondarily, so I'm not going to invest too much time in perfecting it. Thanks for reading.
Fair stab at a story . . .
. . . . . . . but as historically accurate as Braveheart or Carry on Cleo !
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