I loved it. I wish my "girl" was that obediant.
Her behavior is exquisite, and the delight she takes in his dominance is perfect. Your phrasing and occasional hint of detail gives the story an edge that full descriptions would cheapen and make less interesting. Well done, Marie.
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I loved it. I wish my "girl" was that obediant.
Glossy and stylish
Her behavior is exquisite, and the delight she takes in his dominance is perfect. Your phrasing and occasional hint of detail gives the story an edge that full descriptions would cheapen and make less interesting. Well done, Marie.
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