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by Anonymous

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by Provoked07/04/12

mystery is the best sexual tension

The imagination is the biggest sexual toy we have and to fill it up with history and facts ruin it. Not knowing is better than knowing.

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by Anonymous07/06/12

Grammar

You need an editor dude.
I had to stop reading due to the appalling grammar.

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by Anonymous07/09/12

good..but...

the concept was good and the story was good..but an editor would have made it much better to read.

nick

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