All Comments on 'Sarah Gets Trained Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Has all the elements

Of my favorite kind of story. Looking forward to the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Horrible

Your male protagonist is a 'Grade A' wanker. After briefly seeing into his mind and thoughts I feel I need a shower. Ugh! this story is definitely not for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
love it

please keep writing more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Enjoyed the first chapter very much............

Graphic and involving, thank you. 5 stars is hardly adequate.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Same 5+

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

5+ is good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Step One

A good start

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