All Comments on 'It's an Ill Wind'

but I can't fathom the relationship between the husband and the lover. There's no way on this earth could I ever see the two of them becoming friendly, even if the lover is innocent but then, she was wearing her ring, wasn't she? She came to a just end. It's only too bad it didn't happen sooner.

4 stars.

Is English your second language? There are some weird sentences, words missing etc, I gave up reading.

You've scored an 'H' right out of the box! This is quite a stellar achievement! :) You already know what I think of this story, Demure!

Loved the story. Luckily, we lived in England for a while, so I no problem understanding some of the local coloquialisms such as "hoovering" (vacuuming to those of us in the USA). Keep up the great writing!

It feels slightly uncomfortable to comment on my own story, but Janet, who kept her lover on the hook without committing herself, was note above practising deceit on him, too - her red coat had pockets and she had a deep bag.

I appreciate the way you allowed the characters to be more complex than the characters of a lot of stories on this site. And you gave the characters time to grieve rather than have them simply be "rescued" from their grief by a new romance. Please continue writing.

She speaks English, not American.

You wrote a wonderful story, I look forward to more of your work.

PTBzzzz

perhaps its too realistic..but where is d romance,.? Would do with a bit depth of characters..! the thought of Rosie..n there goes his normalcy..? grip grip..

Very offbeat.

Your dialog is some of the best, too. Quite natural, with none of the run-on blathering which should best be reserved for children...like when Rosie talked about her weekend at Carol's. Fecking adorable, that. And the British colloquialisms. "Bags on top"! What a hoot!

The only negative? I once had a Carol in my life, and I now refer to her as She Who Shall Remain Nameless. Yes, that bad. Not a cheater, just an awful, insecure, psychologically troubled mess of a person.

The Mystery of Janet, though...hmm, hmmm.

would've liked to have heard more about the depth of betrayal by janets dark side, but a great read 5*

First, why did he keep her sex toys and fancy underwear? Secondly, and more importantly, why did he have the new GF use/wear them? Seems highly unlikely to me. Sorry, had to mark it down for those reasons.

Very good story. 4*