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by Anonymous

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by Tzara06/28/12

I have to worry about this now too?

A white hair matters! What a grave
Development--an aging knave
Needs confidence to misbehave
With younger women. He will crave
Her firm-toned flesh, perhaps he'll rave
On flexibility, the wave
Her body--undulant, depraved--
He rows upon, mere galley slave.

I guess, like porn star, from his nave-
L to his groin he should just shave.

The best roads are the ones best paved.

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by Ashesh906/28/12

Tzara's witty poetic repartee

Is as nice as the original poem !

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by tazz31706/28/12

OLDS MENS PUBES AND BUTTS

dont allow the clothes a good fit, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Desejo06/29/12

Per Tzara's suggestion then...

I shall recommend he attend the cotillion
with a boyzilian.

Anyway, trimming the bushes always helps to show off the tree!

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