All Comments on 'Danny'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Did I miss something? She's over 18 and her parents kicked her out. They don't have a say in when or who she marries.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Mayb he wants to ask for permission? Like an old time thing? Defiantly missing something there but not a bad first try.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
i thot it good

Just because she's eighteen doesn't mean she wasn't still living with her parents and that they kicked her out when she refused to stop seeing the guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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are you going to continue this..i would love to see her pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good fantasy overall. But I think he could've been a little bit rougher with her. I think she would've liked that too.

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