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WHEN THE USEE WANTS REVENGE
the user should have been more careful. TK U MLJ LV NV
#2 THE OLD SEXIST ATTITUDE
when and if rape is inevitable......, TK U MLJ LV NV
timeless
I liked what The Man said to her at the end, "Never believe you are not worth loving. The World is not such a fucked up pit that we can't dig our way out of it."
We all want the Tony's of this world to meet their end this way, I think.
You Tell****
A cold ass story damn that was good!! Thanks for sharing
Had to happen sometime
Finally, a story of yours that I didn't like. Too dark and too preposterous for me. I haven't tried to price, but I have a hard time believing the actress/model would have had the cash to pay to have the guy kidnapped, smuggled out of the country and into another, bribe the prison officials and have the prison wired for video.
No one bats 1.000 but I think this still puts you around .950
I like revenge but...
this was under the wrong heading. Don't they have one for "Brutality/murder"? That's where this dark tale belonged. No fun or entertainment in reading this sorry tale.
I liked it
Revenge is best served cold. It's supposed to be dark & disturbing, otherwise it's not revenge...
Well done!
This is what all revenge stories should be; cold, calculated, and precise. While there could have been a little bit more description on how The Man (It's Taylor Eden, right?) caught Tony, maybe a little back story on Valerie, ultimately they weren't necessary to making this a good story.
The end, and by that I mean those last two glorious paragraphs, was just perfect. I absolutely love the part where Tony's hopes for freedom and vengeance are shattered under the abuse of the inmates. I've always loved stories where the protagonist crushes the spirit of the one who wronged him, but I rarely find one as well done as this.
At the time of this comment, I'll have read 90-95% of your submissions(didn't read the TG pieces, as they don't really do anything for me, entertainment-wise), and I must say, I love almost all of it. Consistently, you have proven to be one of -if not the- best writers on this site by a significant margin, and I check three or four times a week for a new submission.
I hope to read more from you soon.
Thank you
This was a tough story to write. It was inspired by a story here where a woman is caught in a bad situation and the sleazy bag 'friend' promises "one more time and you'll be out" and keep destroying her reputation and life - in the end she simple goes along with the scumbag and makes money and is okay with things. I didn't like that ending so I wrote another one.
I wrote this in a minimal way to emphasized Tony's final fate and what Taylor tells Valarie at the end.
Minimalism makes this story
The minimalist style of this story was brilliant. It would have been weaker if longer.
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