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All Comments on 'Branding of the Vampire Queen'

by HeroOfLifeAndDeath

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LazerousLazerousalmost 12 years ago
Good story

You should expand on it

windkarmawindkarmaalmost 12 years ago
I liked it.

I agree, expand it and keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more more

expand on it please I cant wait to read more !!

WritersAnonymousWritersAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Encore!

Please expand this story, I greatly enjoy it, and I would like to see more in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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Very good story, hope to see this story expanding.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Hah,truly a crafty hunter! XD

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
lame

there's no story its just guy comes in then brand then boom he wins, there's no background just 123 wins its kind of boring, but if you expanded this then it would go more smooth, this is not a flame but a helpful note on what to do

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