All Comments on 'Making the First Move'

by __Lisa__

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wish my first time...........

......had been like this.

Slow.

Sweet.

Sensuous.

Sexy !

Keep writing for us, please.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
As ever _Lisa_

excellent writing

britbrit1103britbrit1103over 11 years ago

One of the best stories I've read. Absolutely love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wonderful

more to the story? I hope so. This was excellent!

Sidney43Sidney43over 11 years ago

That was a really well written, tender, loving, sexy story. If every woman had a first time like that it would be a much better world we live in.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 11 years ago
Give it a 5+

Wonderful story, so glad to see a man that has the values of a gentleman and not taking advantage of that is impaired, a good man!

It was great to read a gentle loving story between a man and woman without all the BS about a huge cock.

Too bad every womens first time couldn't be like that, unfortunately most have lost their virginity as teenagers to teenage boys that didn't know what they were doing.

Keep writing, you have a real talent and a gift for making the readers see the story as they read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

5 star!!! Loves it!!!

rgainedirgainediover 11 years ago
Very Hot

Nicely done. I really enjoyed reading it!

F_WhateverF_Whateverover 11 years ago
You've made it again!

Another excellent first time! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent work

You real know how to play with the reader.

I was really turned on and you left me hungry for more, good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
terrific

This was a terrific read

DoktahZDoktahZover 11 years ago
Fantastic!

Absolutely incredible story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Ammmazing

LadyFalconLadyFalconabout 11 years ago
Damn, Woman.

You are amazing. I love your writing. So damn hot and sweet and sexy and I'm running out of words. I am glad you are posting on Lit again. Proposition is still my favorite one of yours but these last few I've read have been very very good.

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
What lovely stories you write

Another gorgeous story.

Written well and i love the characters

OleguyOleguyabout 10 years ago
Bloody Bonzer

I hope my ancient Ockerism does not offend. That was a superb story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Excellent

I really enjoyed this and your massage story. You are skilled at creating characters and making the seduction and sex scenes something memorable instead of the "wham, bam thank you ma'am" style we see all too often

smc331smc331about 10 years ago
Hot DAMN!

You have firmly ensconced yourself on my favorite writers list...whew! That was *way* hot...

soccer_mom_112565soccer_mom_112565about 10 years ago
Great Story

5 stars I wish I could have gave it more

igol090igol090over 8 years ago
Very good !

Very good !

MissClassyMissClassyabout 8 years ago
OMG, Awesome!!

This is like, one of the most beautiful, sweet, sexy stories on literotica.

Totally loved it!!!

As per me, this is a true erotic story, unlike so many others that are just porn in words.

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 8 years ago
Nice work!

Especially like the ebbing and flowing of their exchanges of empowerment!

MarshallaMarshallaalmost 6 years ago
Perfect. Absolutely perfect.

I found you in another author's Favorites and chose a story with a high score. Now I see why it was so high.

A great combination of torturous teasing and passionate pleasing.

In the "real world" , these two would belong together, no matter the age difference.

5 Stars for a great read!

Ginger630Ginger630over 3 years ago

Love this story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What an impressive first time. Wow!

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 2 years ago

Wow, great job Lisa ;->

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Thank you for reading my stories. :) My focus has shifted more to writing novels these days. If you're interested in following my work outside of Lit, you can find me on Amazon/Kindle under pen names L.J. Bradley (Only the Truth, After the Show, The Sweetest Fling, From the S...