All Comments on 'Country Girl'

by Jim_and_Sarah

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Very hot little description. I started to write how improbable it was then remembered an odd encounter, in my youth, that was not all that different in many respects. Thanks for sharing.

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
A most remarkable piece

I almost never feel this about a story on Lit, but I have to say it. This is perfect, just perfect.

Pinkpeony101Pinkpeony101almost 12 years ago

Thank you... an amazing amount of detail... so I felt as though I was there

littlefillylittlefillyalmost 12 years ago
Very Nice!

Thank you for this great story. I have to say that a lot of times when looking for story's to enjoy I'm looking for,,, More then you can get in a book from the book store down the road. A lot of times when author's write multiple page stories there is ALOT of back round that while good for the story is hard to get through to find that extra bit. This one was great because while you gave a story line and plot you didn't spend 2 1/2 pages getting to the good part. 5 star's from me, and I almost never give out the star's ... Thank you

LadyPartsLadyPartsalmost 12 years ago
Very well done!

The story was incredibly erotic. The writing was perfect. It had such a perfect flow I found I was listening to his thoughts complete with heavy breathing and exclamations. Really excellent story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Bullseye

Scotsman said it. This is perfect, and breathtaking, and searingly hot, and just so damn splendid and compelling. I will be in a haze for the rest of this day. At least.

--MJtGD

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Magnificent writing

This one really gets the blood racing! I haven't been so aroused in a long time.

Jim is perfection

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Well written and definitely hot, but I also couldn't stop laughing. You sent up the 'worried I'm gonna get killed by these people' so well and then he does all that? I kept waiting for Farmer John to bust through the door. Does sweet little Sarah turn loose the cows on rainy nights to get some action?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yes!

That was fucking hot. My God. I think I came three times reading that!

Apple_of_EdenApple_of_Edenabout 9 years ago
Pure Enjoyment!

I really enjoyed this story. It was bright and refreshing, completely out of the norm from what I have read online, at least most of the time. I truly enjoyed it. Fun, exciting, and nuanced in many ways. Nicely done and very picturesque in your wording. Thanks for the entertaining read.

submittingsparklessubmittingsparklesover 5 years ago
This is still one of the hottest stories here

I mean god damn. Hot build up(foreplay isn't just for vanilla sex, guys), hot spanking, hot sex. What more could a girl ask for?

fmlfrl2fmlfrl28 months ago

one of the first i read. marked me to say the least

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