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Again a humiliation story

This writer has migrated to white only domain used to write on a Black dominant story realmn. Nonetheless the plost are all the same and sterile.

take a gun and end it all

but first pull the dildo out your ass you gay fucker

Scum author...

You sorry asshole of an author. How about going to Iran where they will appreciate you skills and reward you accordingly.

yes get the gun

but you only need one bullet for yourself just put it in your mouth and point to the top of your head and get this over with.

Stupid gay story

Like or not . . .

. . . characterise as written. There are several elements that some readers won't care for in this short story, the IR aspect, the bi-sexual aspect, and just the wife with a lover aspect that so many readers here seem to love to rant about. Those are legitimate dislikes for some guys. What I don't see is the anonymous responder who begins with the headline of humiliation. The only single scene where humiliation of husband might come into play is when wife is riding hubby after dancing with a stranger at the company party. It was clear to me reading that author intended both principles to take that as humor within the context of the story. Other than that everything about the relationship between husband and wife was straightforward, open and agreed upon. Even the meeting with the black stud, including the bi-sexuality, was a completely mutual event.

If you don't like the story say so, but don't make the story into something it isn't.

Better placed

I think that this would be better placed in the IR category. It would find greater audience appeal there. A warning on the bi part would keep some of the negative readers away. You used pretty much all of the elements required for ugly comment posts. I didn't like the subject matter myself but it was written well enough to get me to the end.

An excutive who is a submissive?

Not likely.

Saw the name guessed it's the usual racist fucked up shit and voted 1 star without reading it.

Two Things

Wrong category and this is just racist crap IR,Gay,Group. Loving wives no 1* I think this author writes and posts this garbage on purpose Moron

making it

read the way you want it to read. bobnbobbi comment is so full of shit it reeks they take this racist words and use them to suit their sicko life style, he's a racist and they are idiots case closed.

typical

racist shit

Cuckold is Fetish

Post this in the proper category.

There's no Stupid Dumb Ass Husband category so post it in FETISH.

"1"

No words are necessary.

childish, pathetic, garbage, written by a loser

who hasn't had sex in decades... taking your own life would be going society a favor.

You usually have a better command of the language...

...though the plot was not a surprise. Why bother?

As soon as I saw dsoul wrote it

I knew it was nigger garbage and not worth reading. This fucking jungle bunny continues to put out racist tripe at an alarming rate. Don't they hang niggers where he lives? If not they need to. Fucking coon.

little BOYS and their fanticys

it is a shame that the BOYS can't get it up without a fair skin . i have noted of late on my last trip to Vegas that most of the BOYS had utter pigs/slugs on their arms.. i must admit that i do not care for mixing of races but friends are fine.i guess my question is from the BOYS with so many foxy dark women out there why ? i guess you are not a MaN after all it takes more than a dick to be a man .

TRASH

Pure fucking trash. "-1"

Bad!!

Bad!!

Curious

Why does DSoul need to repeatedly portray Caucasians as pencil-dick wimps who cannot satisfy Sweetie but The Black Bull CAN, almost automatically? It suggests to me that DSoul is a Black Dude with a 3 1/2 inch (and thin) peepee! Else why this persistent theme? Don't regale him, pray he finds self-acceptance!
Story, however, sucks, so 2*

P. O. S.

When are they going to start allowing us to give negative votes. Giving a 1 star is too much of a compliment.

Go fuck yourself

Stupid nigger.

go fuck yourself

stupid Kracker

lol I comment about the fag assed anon

then think dumb assed writer calls me a fag, have you read what you wrote shit for brains. The only fag her is you d "I like cock" soul. Just another queer with a keyboard, does your slutty ass wife know your gay?

faghater

More like nigger lover.

weak

your stories are weaker by the submission. but, whatever dude, you can have all the fat white ho's you can con.

your english is pretty good for a guy from nigeria, bullshit buddy.

Isn't it strange

Isn't it strange how most of the commentators are anonymous and all are not authors themselves. Obviously jealousy is the main reason for the negative comments. Switch on the Anonymous comments filter; ignore the jealous brigade and continue to write your entertaining and erotic stories.

angie is always craving for nigga dick

stupid cunt gives five stars for a face full of nigga jizz

Well written bi cuckold story

Sort of wish that the stud had bred the wife's pussy and cuckold sucked his cock clean. Then ate her creampie. But that might be the next chapter. Love a cuckold that gets involved sucking cock, licking balls, etc. Some even let studs fuck their cuckold pussy's. Stretching them, fucking them, and getting bred just like the slut wife.

When I read...

When I read in a story things like: "this group of black guys who belong to some sort of club, and they call themselves the Tongue Patrol gang", I know that the story will have smal or big hints in racism and superiority races... And in the end was exactly that...The couple surrendered to the superior black race...It would be racism if the races were the inverse...

Lucky Alice

Nice story would have liked you to continue on to the next phase with Alice being filmed by her husband and Alice having more than just one member of the TP round to service her.