All Comments on 'A God Called Bruce Pt. 04'

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zarroc789zarroc789almost 12 years ago
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know i say this every time but way better than the last. I love how you put the Ares and Eris in there place. I love your stories keep writing I don't stop, because these stories have ruined all other stories for me that's how good they are.

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zarroc789zarroc789almost 12 years ago
Sorry

When I wrote "I said don't stop" I should have not put I in there because I did not write story sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

You're the real tale master. truth be told, yours is the best story yet on erotica. Am waiting for the next, and it just seems you can't write fast enough to satisfy me. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
!!

Another awesome installment of 'A God Called Bruce'. I have commented before so anything I say won't be new. 5 Stars from me and I look forward to read more tales..

Regards,

Tommy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
GOOD!!!!!

Just wanted to say I love this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please, please, please!

Please don't stop writing this story, I love it! Please keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WOW!!!!

this is one of the best stories ive read on literotica

please keep em coming

Dobhran83Dobhran83over 11 years ago
Love the story..but.

this is a great story, it is creative, and well written. My only complaint is the sex. This is LitErotica... It is fine, and often a good thing, to "abbreviate" some sexual encounters to aid in the flow of the story. However, when 99% of the sex in your story is described in one sentence ... I begin to wonder why you are submitting this story on this website.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Video Game

A video game could be made out of this story. With enough replay ability I would play the shit out of it. Go on dates with Gods, Bring humans and aliens together. Help build a a paradise. And somehow work in an antagonist bigger than Aries with plot twist. It would be Epic!

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