This reminds me of those good old days of Mills&boon and Silhouette novels where they hate each other,the alpha male and timid female....etc. How I love this!!!.Easily 5 stars(not for nostalgic reasons but because it is well written!)
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Anonymous07/04/12
Wanting more!
Such a great story! Cannot wait for more :D please, please, please keep posting!
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Anonymous07/04/12
great story
i love it so far, keep going please!
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Anonymous07/05/12
Love it so far!
Daniel is turning out to be a real Mr Darcy.!
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Anonymous07/06/12
Love it!
Keep it going I love this story! ;)
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Anonymous07/06/12
Don't be cruel
Just post the whole story in one go because it is amazing.
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Anonymous07/06/12
Post more please
This is such a sweet story!
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Anonymous07/10/12
I've often wondered why it always feels like I've read your stories before, and it's because they're all the same, same mousy female character and overbearing male counterpart. Is it possible for you to ever write a strong female lead? You also need to learn the difference between THEIR and THERE.
To ANON : You have to be less of a nasty wimp and put your name to your posts. You also shouldn't read if you don't like the characterizations of her main players. You also don't have to be such a nasty asshole when posting! I hate people like that!
Very sweet story by the way. I just hope he shows some progress soon! And she can't train him if she doesn't let him talk to her.
...but its so cute! I just want to give Izzy a big hug!
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Anonymous11/02/12
Ummm...
cannd: just so you know, not everyone who visits this site has an account.
Loving the story by the way. I actually like inexplicable attraction, though I have to groan whenever one of the leads screws up or a supporting character really gets in the way.
Anyway, on to chapter 3!
To the readers, anonymous and all, even when there are errors, you are smart enough to figure out the authors intent. So why fret?
Many readers do not realize, that many so-called mistakes are actually the result of the technology we use. And that damnable Supreme Court ruling requiring programmers to be illiterate!
Spellcheck functions are homophone-phobic {per teapotty Congressional mandate} and auto-correct functions that {by Executive Order} replace the author's original prose with the wrong word in the correct context can be accidentally hilarious.
That this cacophony of machinery and web systems are able to deliver any kind of a coherent message to the end user, qualifies as a supra-natural miracle.
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Delicious!
The plot thickens! I'm so in to this story. There is a richness in your voice, and I love the way you are letting us get to know the characters.
oh the nostalgia!!!
This reminds me of those good old days of Mills&boon and Silhouette novels where they hate each other,the alpha male and timid female....etc. How I love this!!!.Easily 5 stars(not for nostalgic reasons but because it is well written!)
Wanting more!
Such a great story! Cannot wait for more :D please, please, please keep posting!
great story
i love it so far, keep going please!
Love it so far!
Daniel is turning out to be a real Mr Darcy.!
Love it!
Keep it going I love this story! ;)
Don't be cruel
Just post the whole story in one go because it is amazing.
Post more please
This is such a sweet story!
I've often wondered why it always feels like I've read your stories before, and it's because they're all the same, same mousy female character and overbearing male counterpart. Is it possible for you to ever write a strong female lead? You also need to learn the difference between THEIR and THERE.
To ANON : You have to be less of a nasty wimp and put your name to your posts. You also shouldn't read if you don't like the characterizations of her main players. You also don't have to be such a nasty asshole when posting! I hate people like that!
Very sweet story by the way. I just hope he shows some progress soon! And she can't train him if she doesn't let him talk to her.
Yes, it is a tad corny...
...but its so cute! I just want to give Izzy a big hug!
Ummm...
cannd: just so you know, not everyone who visits this site has an account.
Loving the story by the way. I actually like inexplicable attraction, though I have to groan whenever one of the leads screws up or a supporting character really gets in the way.
Anyway, on to chapter 3!
don;t sweat the little stuff
Totally, I am enjoying this story you created.
To the readers, anonymous and all, even when there are errors, you are smart enough to figure out the authors intent. So why fret?
Many readers do not realize, that many so-called mistakes are actually the result of the technology we use. And that damnable Supreme Court ruling requiring programmers to be illiterate!
Spellcheck functions are homophone-phobic {per teapotty Congressional mandate} and auto-correct functions that {by Executive Order} replace the author's original prose with the wrong word in the correct context can be accidentally hilarious.
That this cacophony of machinery and web systems are able to deliver any kind of a coherent message to the end user, qualifies as a supra-natural miracle.
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