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A Very Private Beach Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/03/12

Fort Bragg at the beach?

I'm confused about how you get Fort Bragg near a beach unless you're talking about a lake. Have you been to Fayetteville NC? It's quite a ways from the sea shore.

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by Anonymous07/03/12

To Anonymous: You're right, there is a Ft. Bragg in NC. There is also a Ft. Bragg on the coast in California, north of San Francisco.
Jehoram: I liked the story. Hope to see more! I gave it a 5!

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by mcollect07/03/12

Great beginning

This must continue! Please 5*

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by William smyth07/04/12

To anonymous

I guess you have never been to Fort Bragg CALIFORNIA nor did you bother to read the introduction to the story.
Fort Bragg is right on the coast. Look it up

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by ctyankee26407/04/12

Great beginning!

I'm very eager to read more of this storyline, it seems that Liz & Dick are at the beginning of a beautiful friendship! Dick surely is a lucky man!

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by Erotonaut07/04/12

What an accommodating young lady

I happily second the call for a follow-up. If this is what Liz will do on a first encounter, the next should be a riot, particularly if the beach gets as steamy as she suggested.

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by Anonymous07/08/12

good story

I very much enjoyed your story- you could see yourself doing the same things they were. Please continue

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by Olinger03/05/14

Very nice

Very well written. I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters.

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by Anonymous01/16/15

Rocks!!!

Dude, your story rocks... hope there is more to cum!

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Great story!

I'm going to be hitting a few nude beaches in the next few weeks, I hope something like this happens!

I loved your descriptive language, very erotic!

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