I'm confused about how you get Fort Bragg near a beach unless you're talking about a lake. Have you been to Fayetteville NC? It's quite a ways from the sea shore.
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Anonymous07/03/12
To Anonymous: You're right, there is a Ft. Bragg in NC. There is also a Ft. Bragg on the coast in California, north of San Francisco.
Jehoram: I liked the story. Hope to see more! I gave it a 5!
I guess you have never been to Fort Bragg CALIFORNIA nor did you bother to read the introduction to the story.
Fort Bragg is right on the coast. Look it up
I happily second the call for a follow-up. If this is what Liz will do on a first encounter, the next should be a riot, particularly if the beach gets as steamy as she suggested.
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Anonymous07/08/12
good story
I very much enjoyed your story- you could see yourself doing the same things they were. Please continue
Fort Bragg at the beach?
I'm confused about how you get Fort Bragg near a beach unless you're talking about a lake. Have you been to Fayetteville NC? It's quite a ways from the sea shore.
To Anonymous: You're right, there is a Ft. Bragg in NC. There is also a Ft. Bragg on the coast in California, north of San Francisco.
Jehoram: I liked the story. Hope to see more! I gave it a 5!
Great beginning
This must continue! Please 5*
To anonymous
I guess you have never been to Fort Bragg CALIFORNIA nor did you bother to read the introduction to the story.
Fort Bragg is right on the coast. Look it up
Great beginning!
I'm very eager to read more of this storyline, it seems that Liz & Dick are at the beginning of a beautiful friendship! Dick surely is a lucky man!
What an accommodating young lady
I happily second the call for a follow-up. If this is what Liz will do on a first encounter, the next should be a riot, particularly if the beach gets as steamy as she suggested.
good story
I very much enjoyed your story- you could see yourself doing the same things they were. Please continue
Very nice
Very well written. I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters.
Rocks!!!
Dude, your story rocks... hope there is more to cum!
Great story!
I'm going to be hitting a few nude beaches in the next few weeks, I hope something like this happens!
I loved your descriptive language, very erotic!
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