All Comments on 'Micro Wave Man Ch. 08'

by sjmhmttep

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BaddGrrlBaddGrrlover 7 years ago
I gave it a 3

Would have been at least 4, but the short, choppy chapters really make it hard to keep reading.

Also, con sider an editor - or at least a human proofreader; there are a lot of places where you have one word where you really meant another that sounds similar - "there" where you meant "their" for example.

And remember: "Dew knot trussed spill chick two ketch awl miss steaks."

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